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Reviewed By: kainee On: April 18, 2004 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the creativity of this AU. To have poor Vegeta suffer from multiple ruts without knowing why. I think this fic is very sensual, which works very well for it ^_~ I think your characterization is also very good, not trite at all. I mean even though having Nappa be insane, Radditz be intelligent and nice while Yamcha is a cheating bastard are not new characterizations. But you handle it in a believable way. I think your OC is also very nicely written. LOL, but I have to admit, given my favorite concept that I feel fanfic authors don't explore enough (which is Trunks and/or Goten accidentally goign back in time to wreak havoc on poor Vegeta) that I would like to see Vegeta's reaction to that AU of this AU. But it is probably a tangent. Please update soon-- I really enjoy your fic a lot! I love VBs! B/C they equal Trunks! And he's soooo goddamn cute as a little kid! ^_^
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Reviewed By: kainee On: April 18, 2004 00:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the creativity of this AU. To have poor Vegeta suffer from multiple ruts without knowing why. I think this fic is very sensual, which works very well for it ^_~ I think your characterization is also very good, not trite at all. I mean even though having Nappa be insane, Radditz be intelligent and nice while Yamcha is a cheating bastard are not new characterizations. But you handle it in a believable way. I think your OC is also very nicely written. LOL, but I have to admit, given my favorite concept that I feel fanfic authors don't explore enough (which is Trunks and/or Goten accidentally goign back in time to wreak havoc on poor Vegeta) that I would like to see Vegeta's reaction to that AU of this AU. But it is probably a tangent. Please update soon-- I really enjoy your fic a lot! I love VBs! B/C they equal Trunks! And he's soooo goddamn cute as a little kid! ^_^
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Reviewed By: GetaGirl 247 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your style of writing. It is soooo refreshing to see an author use feelings and emotions as well as you do. I can literally feel the pain or joy that the character goes through. Too many stories lack this, making them mediocre. I like the agnst with Bulma and Yamcha, I actually feel bad for both of them. I also like the thought of Vegeta being more than just a horny fighter. You gave him a brain and feelings for others, besides Bulma. Keep up the goog work, and finish this story no matter how long it takes. (Too many good stories end up unfinsihed...so sad)
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Reviewed By: spini On: March 11, 2004 10:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey love it
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 17:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! That was an amazing chapter! Where do you pull all of these wonderful details from? And the way you describe everyone's character is terrific! I can't wait for the next chapter; please hurry!!!
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Reviewed By: kainee On: March 02, 2004 08:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this series. Please update soon as I can't wait for the next installment. I think the plot is moving along very well. There is a lot of backstory and your habits as a writer are very good-- you don't tell us that Vegeta is frustrated, you show it. It's really simple to say that all the time to show not tell but a lot of writers still do it... The only thing frustrating me about the plot is the V/B thing but that's only because I'm impatient. I think it's a good reaction though since you have me hooked on the romantic development between them. Although one thing: I don't know how you're handling how a bond is initiated but I didn't know Bulma was emotionally reciprocating Vegeta's feelings in order to be able to participate in those dreams... or is just a physical attraction enough? Also, Yamcha's sudden onslaught of neuroticism was a bit abrupt at first until I realized by reading much farther into the conversation when he and Bulma fight it out that he was reacting to Bulma's kissing Vegeta on the cheek. The fight did seem a bit out of character for Yamcha though since in the anime it gave me the sense that even though he resented the V/B romance, he still didn't do much to stop it. But it still works for your story. On the VB front, perhaps moving their relationship up a little mini-level-- pleeeeeeeease! Great job! Keep on writing! ^_^
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 22:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh, I want more, I want more! Hurry, hurry, hurry! Pretty please, I'll go insane without this fic!! Thank you ; )~
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Reviewed By: spini On: February 18, 2004 12:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey when is the next update? It´s a great fic! lol
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Reviewed By: spini On: December 22, 2003 07:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hey I´m looking forward to the next chapter! Vegeta is so cool. I just love this fic.
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 19:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww, they so cute....anyway, that was a really great chapter, as always. I love your work and I truly regard you as one of the best authors on MM. I hope that you come out with your next chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter! I love how you did a little flashback to Vegeta's past. Please write more when you get the chance! Happy Winter Break!
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Title: Great Read
Reviewed By: Alastair [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 01:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great read. And I mean that. I love how you bother to actually go through how the scene looks. Though sometimes it's a bother to read through all of that. I'm so used to others just skipping right through that, I geuss. Anyway, keep writing!
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Title: Accidental Redemption
Reviewed By: Priest [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 22:24 CST
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this is an interesting story and i look forward to more in the future.
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Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 08:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEEEE!! You added another chapter! I absolutely love your style of writing and everything!! I wish I could write a better review, but I'm not good with literature. I can't wait for the next chapter. Marron bashing will be fun. ^_^ Will there be any Bulma Vegeta lemons?
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - not logged in On: December 03, 2003 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, I'm awful... I've been reading this since the beginning and I don't think I've ever reviewed. I LOVE it!
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