| "Accidental Redemption" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: mona On: November 09, 2003 14:26 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ahhhh!!!! please please update asap. your story is great i cant wait for the nex ch.
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Reviewed By: mona On: November 09, 2003 14:26 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ahhhh!!!! please please update asap. your story is great i cant wait for the nex ch.
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Reviewed By: Eevee [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 02:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I hadn't realized it was your fic that had captured my attention a few months ago. The title was familiar but what it was about was all but forgotten… or so I thought. When I began to read again, I remembered that it was your fic that had me intrigued and that I had been hoping for an update. It is times like this that I wish all my favorite fictions had mailing list - no pressure. ^_~ Anyway, great story. I've enjoyed it a lot. I like how you present your plot and that you are also concerned with the setting. I would like to see more interaction between my favorite couple, though. (Do not mind that so much since I'm too obsessed with Vegeta and Bulma.) I do recognize the importance of laying out the plot first. I like Nurami's story since it gives some insight into the Saiyajin that would otherwise be tricky to do through Vegeta…or Goku (hehehe). I like her, although her opinions of humans in general are annoying. I like Bulma enough that I don't like her being seen as less than intellectual by others. So that is a bother but merely my preference, which has no real bearing on your fic. Nice to see some reaction on Vegeta's part towards Bulma, although that lemon was unexpected but not unwanted. Great job in solidifying that Bulma gets him hot! Cheers!
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Reviewed By: anony On: November 06, 2003 00:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nicely done B/V fic ~ Really liked that lemon teaser : ) Any real action coming soon? Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Evil Blue Crayon On: November 03, 2003 09:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it. I can't wait for the next chapter. I also can't wait for the 'real' lemony freshness to began. What can I say, I'm a lemon head :)
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Reviewed By: Evil Blue Crayon On: November 03, 2003 09:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it. I can't wait for the next chapter. I also can't wait for the 'real' lemony freshness to began. What can I say, I'm a lemon head :)
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Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful!!! Very descriptive and tastefull! I'll be back to read it. If you get an update list, please put me on it!! KarmaGirl242@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, how come I keep getting e-mails saying that you've added new chapters when you obviously haven't??
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, updates are great and all, but what about the next chapter??!! Please hurry!!! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2003 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I have no words .This fic is absolutely awesome Please continue.very well written I love it. Please I need the lemony goodness LOL!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a wonderful story. Very detailed and thought out. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please hurry!! |
Reviewed By: nienna18 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this really is shaping up to be a great epic!!! Keep updating and I'll do the same Evil Saint! |
Reviewed By: lilsaiyin On: July 07, 2003 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!
THAT WAS A REALLY GREAT FIC I LIKE THE END OF CHAPTER 3 IT WAS EXCITING KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND WRITE MORE CHAPTERS |
Reviewed By: Evening Lady On: July 02, 2003 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is your first fic? Amazing! You write so well and describe things like a true poet. You make us think and want to learn the characters. It was wonderful how you made this original and I loved the scenes. Everything was in good perspective and I love how this is turning out.You also had no mistakes! That makes it a lot easier for the readers. I'm sure everyone is quite intrigued with your writing and I hope I see more of your excellent work. You have so much bundled up talent and I'm sure your lemons will be absolutley beautiful. Personally, I'm a big b/v fan and I love lemons with them starring. I just think they have so much chemistry together.You are the perfect writer to show how two people can fall in love in the most interesting and odd ways. Put just a little more detail and I think there wasn't enough solid action. I can't wait for the sparks to fly. What I mean by more detail is like, say, where Vegeta has Bulma by the neck. He feels her body and notices certain reactions within her. Or, she feels herself stirring even though she's in a dangerous situation and she can notice his chest pressed so close. It is said that saiyans have very good smell, so Vegeta could probably smell her arousal. So,don't be lazy with your lemons and please don't quit in the middle of the story like some peopledo. This is a good quality fic with a lot of meaning that can be hard to find, so keep up the good work and you better give us more. Can you please make the chapters a tad longer? UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE soon! |
Reviewed By: Evening Lady On: July 02, 2003 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is your first fic? Amazing! You write so well and describe things like a true poet. You make us think and want to learn the characters. It was wonderful how you made this original and I loved the scenes. Everything was in good perspective and I love how this is turning out.You also had no mistakes! That makes it a lot easier for the readers. I'm sure everyone is quite intrigued with your writing and I hope I see more of your excellent work. You have so much bundled up talent and I'm sure your lemons will be absolutley beautiful. Personally, I'm a big b/v fan and I love lemons with them starring. I just think they have so much chemistry together.You are the perfect writer to show how two people can fall in love in the most interesting and odd ways. Put just a little more detail and I think there wasn't enough solid action. I can't wait for the sparks to fly. What I mean by more detail is like, say, where Vegeta has Bulma by the neck. He feels her body and notices certain reactions within her. Or, she feels herself stirring even though she's in a dangerous situation and she can notice his chest pressed so close. It is said that saiyans have very good smell, so Vegeta could probably smell her arousal. So,don't be lazy with your lemons and please don't quit in the middle of the story like some peopledo. This is a good quality fic with a lot of meaning that can be hard to find, so keep up the good work and you better give us more. Can you please make the chapters a tad longer? UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE soon! |
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