| "Accidental Redemption" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter! I love how you did a little flashback to Vegeta's past. Please write more when you get the chance! Happy Winter Break!
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Title: Great Read
Reviewed By: Alastair [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 01:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great read. And I mean that. I love how you bother to actually go through how the scene looks. Though sometimes it's a bother to read through all of that. I'm so used to others just skipping right through that, I geuss. Anyway, keep writing!
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Title: Accidental Redemption
Reviewed By: Priest [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 22:24 CST
Comment/Review:
this is an interesting story and i look forward to more in the future.
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Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 08:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEEEE!! You added another chapter! I absolutely love your style of writing and everything!! I wish I could write a better review, but I'm not good with literature. I can't wait for the next chapter. Marron bashing will be fun. ^_^ Will there be any Bulma Vegeta lemons?
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - not logged in On: December 03, 2003 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, I'm awful... I've been reading this since the beginning and I don't think I've ever reviewed. I LOVE it!
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Reviewed By: mona On: November 09, 2003 14:26 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ahhhh!!!! please please update asap. your story is great i cant wait for the nex ch.
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Reviewed By: mona On: November 09, 2003 14:26 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ahhhh!!!! please please update asap. your story is great i cant wait for the nex ch.
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Reviewed By: Eevee [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 02:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I hadn't realized it was your fic that had captured my attention a few months ago. The title was familiar but what it was about was all but forgotten… or so I thought. When I began to read again, I remembered that it was your fic that had me intrigued and that I had been hoping for an update. It is times like this that I wish all my favorite fictions had mailing list - no pressure. ^_~ Anyway, great story. I've enjoyed it a lot. I like how you present your plot and that you are also concerned with the setting. I would like to see more interaction between my favorite couple, though. (Do not mind that so much since I'm too obsessed with Vegeta and Bulma.) I do recognize the importance of laying out the plot first. I like Nurami's story since it gives some insight into the Saiyajin that would otherwise be tricky to do through Vegeta…or Goku (hehehe). I like her, although her opinions of humans in general are annoying. I like Bulma enough that I don't like her being seen as less than intellectual by others. So that is a bother but merely my preference, which has no real bearing on your fic. Nice to see some reaction on Vegeta's part towards Bulma, although that lemon was unexpected but not unwanted. Great job in solidifying that Bulma gets him hot! Cheers!
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Reviewed By: anony On: November 06, 2003 00:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nicely done B/V fic ~ Really liked that lemon teaser : ) Any real action coming soon? Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Evil Blue Crayon On: November 03, 2003 09:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it. I can't wait for the next chapter. I also can't wait for the 'real' lemony freshness to began. What can I say, I'm a lemon head :)
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Reviewed By: Evil Blue Crayon On: November 03, 2003 09:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it. I can't wait for the next chapter. I also can't wait for the 'real' lemony freshness to began. What can I say, I'm a lemon head :)
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Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful!!! Very descriptive and tastefull! I'll be back to read it. If you get an update list, please put me on it!! KarmaGirl242@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, how come I keep getting e-mails saying that you've added new chapters when you obviously haven't??
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, updates are great and all, but what about the next chapter??!! Please hurry!!! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2003 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I have no words .This fic is absolutely awesome Please continue.very well written I love it. Please I need the lemony goodness LOL!
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