| "Anything For You" Reviews/Comments [ 211 ] |
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Reviewed By: Angel Black On: June 26, 2003 15:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Somehow......i am one step towards tears. That was so sweet. REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY
Aten: weally weally weally weally
Shadow: Really really really really *gets conked on the head*
Bakura: REALLY REALLY REALLY
Marik: REALLY REALLY REALLY
Angel: GRAPHIC! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 07:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O
Karona:She's actually speechless.
Ah...he...Ry....BUT HOW!!
Karona:Nevermind..
HOW COULD THAT BASTARD KNOW AND NOT EVEN CARE!! GOD! I WILL SO KICK HIS ASS WHEN THIS IS OVER!
Chibi Bakura:Can we hava turn?
*shrugs*Sure. Why not.
Chibis:YAY!
Aren't they cute. That reminds me. I LOVED IT when Aria imitated Seto. It was KAWAII!!Plus I thought it was funny for them to listen to a kid.Cute.
Can I get Ryan? To beat him up and stuff?*coughkillcough*Please?The yamis can have the other people I just want him.Please?
WRITE MORE PLEASE!!
~*~*~PRAISE THE CHEESE~*~*~ |
Reviewed By: Shade A [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 06:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*eye twitching* Steven.. is... a total... BASTARD!!!!! I had a dream where I had ripped Steven's head off and fed it to the crocrodiles and they spit it out cause he was evil.... Heheheheh. It was funny to watch!
After this fic is over can I borrow what's left of Steven, Jessica and Tim? Cause I'm pretty sure that the yamis'll make sure that they are good and dead before taking Ryou and Aten home. Hope those two get through the torture okay... I feel so bad for Ryou... Has to obey his father if he wants Aten to be okay......
Whatever happened to Ryou's medication, anyway? I just noticed that... I know it's at his house but is he taking Aten's or something? Just wondering.
Keep up the good work!
~Shade |
Reviewed By: Angel Black On: June 25, 2003 20:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Angel: I'M GOING TO KILL STEVEN LET ME AT HIM! I WILL BURN HIM TO THE DEATH! I WILL- need a punching bag. *casts a glance at Shadow*
Shadow: Don't look at me!
Angel: Hmph! *fumes* Anger management taht's right.....my friends say i need it.
Shadow: -_- You do.
Angel: *makes strangling motion* The only thing about good stories is they always have good cliffies, but in a way there bad cliffies for me cause i hate cliffies.......so what would you call them good or bad 0.0 I don't know, i ahve a headache, so I'm not going to think about it.
Shadow: GOod, all your logic stuff is scary. |
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 20:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
UGH!!!!!!!!!!! God reading that last part makes me want to be sick!!!!! Except then I would need a new keyboard. Lord above and below please please PLEASE I am begging you make them pay!! if you want I can mail you a list of all hte torturous thigns to do the entire lot!! I bet Jessica is tierd of fucking Steven, Tim, and Ryan but to do that to Ryou?!?! And tehn Tim?!?! He's not a pervert he's hte biggest @#$%^&* (lots of curses, use your imagination). And Ryou with short hair?? I can't picture him like that but no doubt the yamis would notice him anyway.
Oh a good note when Seto was yelling at his men and Aria mimicked him I can jsut imagien that. I beat she looked so adorable. Hee and i'm surprised the letter went throguh.
What else... well not I'm hungry but for hte love fo Heaven and hell and everything in between hurry!! they're close right?? Right?!? *shudders* Worse part is one of my uncles is jsut like Steven and Ryan combined... long story don't ask.
Still a very good story. but god... oh shit i jsut thoguht of something... when this is all over what's gonna happen to poor Ryou?? Will he be able to keep his sanity? I mean he looks so close to losing it... C'mon Aten keeping mommy alive jstu a bit longer!! |
Reviewed By: Sumomo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 14:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sumomo: *Cries endlessly* EVIL TIM!!! EVIL!!! JESSICA TOO!!! EVIL!!!!
Rose: I am having a hard time to try to calm down my hikari.... *Wispers something into Kat's ear*
Sumomo: Ok, I'm ok now... hey... can you do another Marik X Bakura lemon.... let's just say "To easy the pain of missing their hikaris" |
Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 07:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope they're smart enough to look behind the bookcase.
Bakura:You don't trust us.
*stares*They best be smart enough.
POOR RYOU!! THAT BITCH AND BASTARD DOING THINGS TO HIM!!
Poor Marik. He love Aten so much.;_; I hate seing strong people cry. Its just sad.
BAKURA AND MARIK YOU BETTER BE SMART ENOUGH TO LOOK BEHIND THE BOOKCASE!!
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!
~*~*~PRAISE THE CHEESE~*~*~ |
Reviewed By: Malik's girlfriend [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 06:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so funny with Anzu thinking everythings friendly. I you continue this. |
Reviewed By: Sailor Optimal Optimus On: June 24, 2003 23:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
When is Ryou gonna get rescued anyway? I'm tired of seeing him torture and waiting for Bakura and Marik to tear Steven, Jessica, Ryan, and Tim apart and torture them to death.
Will we have to wait for that after five or so chapters? Sorry, I just don't like it when people as nice as Ryou are tortured by family members and worst enemies. Great story so far, though. |
Reviewed By: Angel Black On: June 24, 2003 20:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oooo......no stones left unturned........or bookcases. At least i hope not. I HATE CLIFFIES! It bugs me. |
Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2003 16:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
O.O NOT RYOU'S HAIR! HIS HAIR IS... HIS... can't think of the right word... Poor little Aten! Tim! Jessica! Steven! Ryan! *Goes on killing spree* Ah, the joys of driving illegally... I think I received a misdelivered plot bunny last night. I'm pretty sure it's yours. Do you want it? *Points at plot bunny cage* Mine all escaped. Why didn't Marik and Bakura ask WHO lived in those houses in the woods? Probably would have given away too much information, huh? KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! ANOTHER TWO BAGS OF MAGIC BISHIE PLUSHIES AND WEAPONS! Enjoy! |
Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2003 06:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O How could he cut off Ry-chans hair?! I LIKE HIS HAIR!! STEVEN I SWEAR TO ANY GOD THAT I WILL TORTURE YOU MUCH MORE HORRIBLE THAN THE YAMIS EVER COULD!!
*breathes*I feel better!^__^PLEASE KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!
~*~*~PRAISE THE CHEESE~*~*~ |
Reviewed By: NegaCat On: June 23, 2003 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*so inraged with fury that words are not pronuncable* grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr grrrrrrrrrrrr grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *taking DEEP breaths* I............HATE.........THAT..............MONSTER!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!! I-HOPE-THAT-BAKURA-AND-MARIK-TORTURE-HIM-UNTIL-HE-BEGS-FOR-MERCY-BUT-GETS-NONE-BEFORE-THEY-KILL-HIM!!!!!!!!!!!! That is all, KEEP UP THE INCREDIBLE WORK |
Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 09:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*laughing*This was funny! I'm in such a good mood! I feel so much better!
Poor Malik! He misses his little "sessions" with Marik.
Is Ryou okay? Did he actually let Aten drink the wine? WHERE THE HELL ARE BAKURA AND MARIK!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!
~*~*PRAISE THE CHEESE!!!*~*~ |
Reviewed By: Shade A [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Malik....... I hope the yamis find Aten and Ryou soon. Good job, as always!!
~Shade~ |
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