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Title: ????
Reviewed By: nada1991 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude when are you gunna write the next one?? it's been forever
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 02:49 CDT
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I did read the ending a while back and don't really remember why I didn't review. But anyway the ending seemed like you just threw up your hands and said "The hell with it!" and just wrote anything. Really none of it threaded together with the rest of the story. I was pretty disappointed with the end especially after having to wait so long for an update.
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Title: Chapter 15
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting twist to the story. Update soon. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Inugurl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 02:23 CST
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Interesting! I thought some parts were funny and exciting! I liked it! Great story!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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unlike the reader before this, i think the story was pretty well put together. i agree with the others that the ending was a little tainted but i can understand where you came from with it. my confusion was released when Miroku and Sango both made it through the well, along with Kikyo. where did she come from? lol. it was good. i feel the ending was rushed though. i do understand how it is to end up getting drawn out over it. i think you should do a follow up for the story, however. there are still bases to be covered (including kagome and yash, hojo's infatuation {photos of Kagome? hmmm}, and other goodies like that.) good job though, seriously. it was a well done story.
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Reviewed By: Bill the Surly On: July 07, 2004 05:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Women do not orgasm during rape. Rape isn't a pretty thing and rape should most certainly be a plot device. Really which Sesshoumaru are you writing about? The Sesshoumaru I know wouldn't willing couple with a human.. and he most certainly wouldn't purposely create a hanyou. And another it a woman does not instantly conceive.
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Reviewed By: Descendant of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 01:34 CDT
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I love your story so far. I was wondering what the baby's name meant and if your going to post the next chapter sometime in the near future.
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Reviewed By: lil_rei_chan*notloggedin On: May 30, 2004 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eee!!! you're going to do a sequel?! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So gald you finally up-dated and can't wait till you do it again^_^
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Reviewed By: LC On: May 30, 2004 17:26 CDT
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Oh my god...that happens to be the worst character change I have ever read that you have done... Take this as a serious critique, Princess, re-do it. I know your plans for the sequel but this is nowhere near even 1/3 of your ability and I'm sure you can still make it fit through LONG harsh words of existance and all that rot. And it IS possible to do without kiling someone.
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Reviewed By: LC On: May 30, 2004 17:26 CDT
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Oh my god...that happens to be the worst character change I have ever read that you have done... Take this as a serious critique, Princess, re-do it. I know your plans for the sequel but this is nowhere near even 1/3 of your ability and I'm sure you can still make it fit through LONG harsh words of existance and all that rot. And it IS possible to do without kiling someone.
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Reviewed By: Shadoe On: May 30, 2004 16:54 CDT
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The was interesting but I have to say i was somewhat dissappointed with the outcome with Sesshoumaru I mean "yea you raped me three months ago but what the hell let's be friends" you're kidding me and he didn't even really pay for his own crime and even justifies it by saying he got Kagome and Inuyasha together come on. Well we'll see how the rest pans out but it seems a bit flakey right now.
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Title: kinda wrong
Reviewed By: katikat02 On: May 30, 2004 01:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the story up until the very end when you made Sesshomaru all cute and cuddly. He raped Kagome. That is not something you can be all cute and cuddly with someone after. I dunno, the whole tone of your story was lost. I really was enjoying it up until then.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 20:48 CDT
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Umm...an updateor something. You could at least tell us that you're done writing this story.
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Reviewed By: AngelOfDiamonds~Lia~ On: April 27, 2004 16:05 CDT
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This is an amazing story!!! Please update soon!!! PLEA~~~~SE!!! AOD ~Lia~
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