| "Broken" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Reviewed By: UnlovedBandNerd On: July 22, 2003 13:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG!! That was so good... so... when are you going to continue eh??... because if you write more I will bee hear reading :) |
Reviewed By: Kapt. Nemo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 16:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice...you've managed to keep me interested even after the lemon! You describe things very well, and have a lot of creativity.
You tend to drift towards the OOC for characters sometimes, though...for instance, (and I'm not getting all bent on my personal morals, now) when Kagome suggests abortion, it seems to me that normally, if put in that situation, Kagome is too nurturing and accepting, and perhaps too strong to even consider it as an "easy way out"...just my opinion, though.
Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: ask ketchum On: July 16, 2003 11:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked your story. you should write some more. |
Reviewed By: UNKNOWN On: July 16, 2003 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOUR STORY IS THE BEST WRITE MOR PLEASE |
Reviewed By: corinntkn24 On: July 16, 2003 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first story i have read that has so much at stake for the characters and it was thrilling to read i felt the emotions the characters where going through because your words where well written I can't wait to read the rest.
Please finish it soon |
Reviewed By: MommyRogers [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 23:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You write very well - definitely on my favourites list. You keep your verb tenses well, and you obviously don't rely on your spell checker alone. Keep up the good work, and I will be looking for more . . . |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 16:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this fic (^_^) Today is the first time I've found it, so I would just like to say that I absolutely loved this part of it:
“I’m going to release your hands; if you move them, I’ll remove them.”
My mind may possibly be on the same level as Sesshoumaru's is in this fic >) I like the personality you have given him. Also, I like the idea of actually having demons present everywhere in Kagome's time. I think you've done a good job on the character interaction throughout this fic (^_^) |
Reviewed By: KinkyKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 16:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Chapter 11 was too cute as well and i like the twist it is hilarious hojo part demon. ha ha ha.... keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Brittanica On: July 11, 2003 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HURRY&CONTINUE!!! IT'S BEEN MORE THEN A MONTH!!! |
Reviewed By: notzathros On: July 01, 2003 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fiction. Please keep writing!! |
Reviewed By: fAnFiC FaNaTiC On: July 01, 2003 05:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't read the entire story yet, but I wanted to post this before I forgot. How do you get a 1/15 youkai? I mean, if anything wouldn't it be 1/16? Other than that the story is AWSOME, minus the the weird grammar mistakes. This is definately one of the best fanfics I've read in a long time. |
Reviewed By: ren On: June 30, 2003 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really good story and i cant wait to read the end. |
Reviewed By: rose On: June 23, 2003 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool i love this story please continue with chapter 10 cause i wanna know what happens to kagome and sesshomaru ,and inuyasha hope she picks inu-chan as the father |
Reviewed By: Niedermann On: June 18, 2003 13:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not sure exactly how the rating thing works but i liked your fan fic nd i would like toread the ending.so please finish :) |
Reviewed By: Lutra On: June 15, 2003 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, at first I was a little put off by the Fluffy involvement, but I really like your story thus far! Keep up the good work! |
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