"Broken" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Reviewed By: ills On: June 09, 2003 18:22 CDT Comment/Review: excellent, very cute! |
Reviewed By: Brittanica [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 13:23 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: LEMONS RULE, DUDE!!! |
Reviewed By: angle-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 12:21 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: KAWII I love your story.
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Reviewed By: ills On: June 08, 2003 23:42 CDT Comment/Review: i really like this story and i wish that you would contiune it! |
Reviewed By: Inu Fan On: June 05, 2003 18:01 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved the story. U need to keep writing so I can find out what happens. Please write another chapter. She has to pick Inu Yasha as the father of the baby. I won't know till u tell me though!!
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Reviewed By: Inu Fan On: June 05, 2003 18:01 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved the story. U need to keep writing so I can find out what happens. Please write another chapter. She has to pick Inu Yasha as the father of the baby. I won't know till u tell me though!!
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Reviewed By: AnkukoTenma On: June 05, 2003 15:29 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I can't believe people are not visiting this great story!! I swear is has to be the best story I have read with my Sess.-sama as the bad the guy, but I still love even though I don't like what he did to Kagome! GRRRRR!!!! I do hope that you write more and asap. |
Reviewed By: darkfox On: June 05, 2003 01:48 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: it's kouga i knew it was haha!....sorry me on suger high love the story a lot |
Reviewed By: misty On: June 03, 2003 14:07 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: well i have to say i like the storyes |
Reviewed By: princess-of-anime-kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 18:38 CDT Comment/Review: This story is great so far, keep going ^^ Ur an excellent writter, I hope everything turns out okay for Kagome... btw... HAHAHAHA! IM DA FIRST REVIEWER! BOW DOWN TO ME... |
Reviewed By: Rei-Rei On: July 16, 2003 18:13 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: GAH! update again soon!! >. |
Reviewed By: Ceyana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 22:56 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Aw! I just really like this story! write more! |
Reviewed By: Demonchic_K On: June 03, 2003 10:34 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i love this story, i love the idea and you write wonderfully!! Keep up the great work!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: KinkyKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 16:02 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You still are a 10 in my book! and pillows well i tend to sleep with no less than 9 or 10. I really like the fuzzy ones!!!^-^ But yeah chaper nine is adorible! One of my faves. |
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 16:10 CDT Comment/Review: YAYYYYY!!! TWO chappies!!! ^_^ Veddy good, btw!
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