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Reviewed By: rose On: June 23, 2003 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool i love this story please continue with chapter 10 cause i wanna know what happens to kagome and sesshomaru ,and inuyasha hope she picks inu-chan as the father |
Reviewed By: Niedermann On: June 18, 2003 13:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not sure exactly how the rating thing works but i liked your fan fic nd i would like toread the ending.so please finish :) |
Reviewed By: Lutra On: June 15, 2003 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, at first I was a little put off by the Fluffy involvement, but I really like your story thus far! Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: kagome 2003 On: June 14, 2003 19:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
i loved it hehe (*U~) |
Reviewed By: KagOMe_san On: June 14, 2003 08:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it ..hey im part japanese and mai name is kagome.i thought wow did u make this name up ...then i saw the show inysha and saw she had the same name as me!!!!!!!!1watever ... i loved your stories....please keep writing**--**-**-*-*-*-*~!~!~ |
Reviewed By: ryuu On: June 13, 2003 04:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok now, who do you think you are, leaving off like that...hurry and update, woman!...please |
Reviewed By: Rei-Rei On: June 12, 2003 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this fic!! u gotta finish it tho!!
when is tha baby born?? c'mon keep goin with it!!! |
Reviewed By: Chibi Mizu Tenshi On: June 12, 2003 00:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Two words....GREAT FIC!!!!!
I'll admit, at first I wasn't sure what I'd think about this, but it's grown on me....like fungus to old cheese!!! *reads what was just written* @_@ *sigh* Just ignore that. It's late. Caffine high has offically worn off. And Adult Swim is almost over.
Time for bed!!! *grabs pillows* YES!! Pillows are great! I only wish I could sleep as long as Kagome and Inuyasha get too ^_~
Update soon or face the wrath of a sleep deprived, over caffinated *gulps more soda*, hopping and praying for more fluff in the next chapter, college student!!!!!
Ja!!!! |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 23:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
So far this is just too cute! ^-^ I cat wait for you to write more. Oh and the part where Inu Yasha is randomly sugesting names and he goes Ranma and Kagome says it sounds like someting for a cursed kid... I was howling. SO good.
Awsome story
Keep it up
You being bookmarked right... now ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Soranji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice job i really like this story please update. |
Reviewed By: purplestuff On: June 10, 2003 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
ya! this is a great story! me likee alot! please update soon i want the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: inuyoukai2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 15:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
if you can, try to update at regular intervals. readers like that. |
Reviewed By: katikate On: June 10, 2003 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
great Story! Kept me on my toes, I cant wait to see how it turns out. I love it when Fluffy is Good, but he is even better when he is BAD! Bye! |
Reviewed By: Kagome On: June 10, 2003 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was really sad in the beginning :*( but now it is really sweet..aaaw.. i like it, and how u write it ^_^ keep writing!!! |
Reviewed By: Yumiki-chan On: June 09, 2003 23:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
TTTOOOO CCCOOOOLLL! This just keeps getting better and better!! This is a great story I love it!!! Ijust don't like the fact that YOU-know-who did what he did to Kagome he took that from Inu-chan!!!!!! WWWHHHAAAAA!!!!! But other wise I'm love'n this story. Oh, yeah! Love the pillows!!
lol, Yumiki-chan |
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