| "To Remember" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumaruboi On: July 11, 2003 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that u are really good. I hope to read what happens next. It sounds really interesting and what would Naraku do with Kagome? I really want to know and I think other people wants to know too. |
Reviewed By: Skie On: July 09, 2003 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep going! there are way too few nar/kag fics out there! love the story too by the way |
Reviewed By: Darby Thomas On: July 06, 2003 22:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good God, i read this, i was skeptical, but this thing, its just so...
i'll put it nicely: unpalatable.
this won't be an all out flame, you have the ideas, just not...the background knowledge:
1. Naraku is a freak , NOT a goth. you have you stereotypes mixed up. goths are more like the suicidal loner type, freaks are the mansonites scaring the church-going hypocrites and blemishing the goth name (not that i'd know or anything...no really, i don't).
2. The accident occured on campus, correct? Standard procedure is to notify the parents to get the insurance worked out (derived from personal experience).
3.Naraku JUST hit her in the face? JUST? I know punches to the face hurt, but that's not standard freak m.o. We're talking black eyes, a couple of punches to the gut, and a death threat at LEAST (also derived from personal experience...portray it right otherwise future victims like myself will get the wrong idea of what to expect.)
i want to stress, though the amnesia thing is kind of cliche and soap opera-ish, you still have a lot of good ideas, very creative too. This fic isn't that bad for an eleven year old trying to portray high-school life. good work kid. :) |
Reviewed By: Dark Angel On: June 28, 2003 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u should update all the chaps all ready because u are up 2 chapter like 12 i think or higher at fanfiction.net are u going to cont. w/the story here or what??? |
Reviewed By: Kilala36 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2003 14:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: 4U2NV On: June 17, 2003 09:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! You don't find many fanfics with a Naraku/Kagome pairing and those that you do find aren't that interesting. But your fanfic isn't so bad. I rather like this. Please continue and Update soon. |
Reviewed By: shao On: June 14, 2003 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great idea! when i first saw it i was kind of skeptical but it is sooo good. write more!!!! |
Reviewed By: Queen of the Wrorld On: June 13, 2003 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was awsome, please update soon? i usally hate Naraku/Kagome fanfics, but i think this one will be pretty good! please update soon |
Reviewed By: MIAKAYUUGI On: June 13, 2003 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fanfics .. yo . keep writing because it is great and your stories r great omg i love them ... u r a writer.. ill say it again your stories r great so keep writing |
Reviewed By: ills On: June 13, 2003 14:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
kool contiune! |
Reviewed By: I LUV IT!!!! On: June 12, 2003 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect 10 plz hurry up & update this gr8t story I am just dyin 2 no wht will happen next make Inuyasha's heart break in2 a thousand pices & make him cry for wht he did 2 poor Kagome. I no i'm evil oh well :) |
Reviewed By: TrAcEy On: June 08, 2003 03:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i totally luv this story plz plz plz hurry up and up date asap xoxo
TrAcEy :] |
Reviewed By: err....... On: June 05, 2003 17:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like it
but i gotta complain
kagome does not have blue eyes its chocolate brown well anyway i love the story keep it up |
Reviewed By: tessa On: June 04, 2003 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good.....I hope you continue this. It would be a shame if you do not finish |
Reviewed By: Kokonutsu On: June 04, 2003 00:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found it really interesting and a gothic Naraku? Classic, i do hope you will continue because i'm hooked now. |
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