| "Price of Power" Reviews/Comments [ 60 ] |
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 (2 lazy to log in) On: November 08, 2003 16:11 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Geez... I hate to say this, but I'm really starting to warm up to Q... after all Trunks is whipped almost as bad a Goten was...
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Title: aaaaaaahhh!!!!!!
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 19:05 PDT
Comment/Review:
Poor Goten..*sigh* Just don't kill off Trunks.. Please?!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 (2 lazy to log in) On: October 15, 2003 19:28 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, a few chapters ago I would have been sorry to see Goten die... bt since he et Bra whip him... oh, well, shit happens. Vegeta was in it!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 16:44 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VEGETA WAS IN IT!!! VEGETA WAS IN IT!!! THIS IS THE BEST CHAPTER YET!!!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 21:09 PDT
Comment/Review:
Hn. I keep thinking I may know what's going to happen next and then bam! you throw a different wrench into the pile. I'd never figure Trunks as one that would stay on Earth. Still, I think it opens up a ton of possibilities later on for the fic. Of course, that just brings me back to my first sentence... I can't believe that Goten and Bra actually bonded! Well, I guess it was inevitable, but still, I was hoping for a G/M romance. Jeez, is anything I think of/hope for going to happen? :) I'm still loving it, AM!
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Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 12:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh! Good ending!! Written flawlessly in your wonderful writing style, I see absolutely no errors!! Wonderful job, AM!!
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Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2003 15:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And now we know why it's called "Price of Power." I wanted Marron to be with Goten! Oh! What's gonna happen?? Very nice chapter!! I love it!!
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Title: Chaps. 15 & 16
Reviewed By: phantomscribe On: September 29, 2003 05:50 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you ask me, you should have let Trunks pound the snot out of Gohan. I know I certainly would have enjoyed it. I know that I have been lobbying for a Goten/Marron romance, but she is starting to get on my nerves as much as Bra does. Neither of them are good enough for him... I do, however, love Pan in this fic. I like her strength and her determination. One more thing... WHERE IS MY VEGETA?!?!
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Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 13:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please let Goten come for Marron!! I wanna see more of them!!
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Title: Grrrrrrr!!!
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2003 17:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Trunks better not hurt Gohan!!!! Why not have Trunks stay on earth!! *smirk* When are we gonna see some Goten/Marron???? Fantastic update!!!
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Reviewed By: ssj4 yuffie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 05:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you've made Bra really evil in this story. I like Bra a lot better than Marron, but I can't stand the way she behaves in this story.
Anyway I think this story is like a breath of fresh air when it comes to T/P fics and I'm looking forward to the ending of it.
By the way: VEGETA KICKS ASS |
Title: In heaven, we pray!
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2003 09:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Trunks is going to follow Pan to be sure! Wonderful update.. I agree with scribe, Goten should have wailed Bra! Heh.. great discription of Bardock mimicing Goku!! Heehee!!
(Always in Rememberence- 911.. A million tears spilled this day .. )
AM, I pray.. you and yours stay safe!! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2003 18:23 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm very disappointed that Goten didn't beat Bra to death...
Very nice chapter... Pan admits her feeling, but still refuses to bend her will... a true Saiyan!
And most importantly....
VEGETA WAS IN IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 18:34 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, well, well...
Marron's pregnant! I guess that's a good thing, might help Goten figure out she's the one for him...
I understand Pan's pride and home sickness, but come on, girl, it's TRUNKS... get over it already.
I hope Goten kicks Bra's ass.
WHERE IS VEGETA??????????????? |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 20:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Bgurl, you crack me up!LOL!*
Heh.. I really love the intense moments between Trunks and Pan in this! Please let Goten end up with Marron! *Prays fervently* |
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