| "Price of Power" Reviews/Comments [ 60 ] |
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Reviewed By: Pauliesmom [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2003 20:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I gotta tell you what an awesome idea this is! I was never a big Pan/Trunks fan but, wow, the way you are fleshing this out is great. A couple of questions though... I'm assuming that even without future Trunks warning about the androids, the constant training that Goku and Gohan have done since their first initial meeting with Vegeta did the trick.(Also no heart virus!) Which leaves this question: if Marron is alive where is Juuhachi? I can't imagine her not noticing what was going on. Or allowing her only daughter to be taken so easily. With the guys not being super saiyans yet, she could have given them a real run for their money. I also wonder why Goku (or Gohan) thought that sending them to Roshi's would hide them from saiyans who have scouters. What about the Room of Time? You can't read the ki of someone in there. I'm gonna guess that they didn't really know what a scouter could do or they thought the girls would hide their ki? And where was Krillin? Oh well, it doesn't really matter now. I'm too busy chomping at the bit to find out what happens next. Btw, don't you get put to sleep in a space pod? What if you had to uh... pee? Hee hee sorry! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: June 21, 2003 16:04 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That last review should have had a 10 of 10 rating for overall rating. Damn fingers.... |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: June 21, 2003 16:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do you have any idea how much I hate you??? You are too talented to be allowed to live!!!
Seriously, AM, what a masterpiece this is. I never, ever thought I'd be so enthralled by Goten and Marron. And I am breathless with anticipation about what will happen between Pan and Trunks. And what about Bra? I don't think she'll much care for Goten's new play thing.
Anyway, I love it. You are the master and I kneel humbly in your presence. |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 14:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AM, I really love the personalities you've given the Saiya-jin in this fic! Trunks and Goten are just so... regal. Granted, there isn't enough Vegeta or Bardock for my satisfaction. :(
I'm so captivated how you've given Trunks that lust for Pan but still the knowledge that she's a "demi" to hold him back.
Then there's the whole Goten situation. What on earth are you going to do with him, girlfriend??? I'd love to see him end up with either Pan or Marron. Somehow, I don't think Marron is going to end up where Goten thinks she is. Not if Bulma has any say in the matter!
As usual, AM, your imagination has spun a beautiful tale and you can't post new chapters fast enough. So, please just post them when you can! :) |
Reviewed By: JuE_ThE_ChIcK [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2003 16:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC PLZ UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Lady Saiyan On: June 10, 2003 11:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep it up |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 10:20 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great story so far keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: June 09, 2003 05:12 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Something tells me Pan and Marron are in for a wild ride... and what about Bra??? I sense a love triangle...
Awesom chapter! |
Reviewed By: KOS MOS 423 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 20:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your story!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON AND IF U LIKE T/P STORIES CHECK MINE OUT! I REALLY NEED 2 SEE WAT HAPPENDS NEXT!!! |
Reviewed By: Son Cara On: June 08, 2003 14:32 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story please continue! |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 13:14 PDT
Comment/Review:
AM, this looks like the beginning of a wonderful fic of epic proportions! You know the drill, though, right? You can't make us wait forever between updates, you can't leave us with those terrible cliffhangers at the end of every chapter, we need regular doses of lemon, lots of chapters with luscious Bardock or Vegeta, and it's nice to see Goku not always win the fight... :)
I love how you've developed Trunks and Goten's personalities so far - they truly sound like aristocratic snobs.
Great start so far, girlfriend - woo hoo! |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 11:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo!! Good to see you posting the fic here... What took you so long???
I lurve it, and I can't wait until my heroic honey makes a bigger appearance - finding true love with a charming Englishwoman perhaps??? *bats eyelashes*
I LIKE the bad Goten - makes a nice change... his foxy ol' Granpa's influence eh???
Hurry up!! I want the next chapter...:D |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: June 07, 2003 20:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I don't know what I enjoyed more... Vegeta beating the snot out of Goku or Vegeta swating down that annoying little snot Gohan like a fly!
Ermmm... anyway, This is the start of another great story! The concept is wonderfully original (of course, coming from you that doesn't surprise me) and the set up is fantastic.
Trunks is quite the arrogant bastard, isn't he? It's going to be interesting to see how he reacts when he finds out that Pan is Goten's niece. And I bet Vegeta pops a blood vessle when he finds out she's been hidden from him all these years!
Be sure to let me know when you update!!! |
Reviewed By: Khandy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 18:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want to be the first to review this story. It was fantastic, one of the best P/T stories i've ever read. 38 chapters of DBZ goodness all fan will enjoy. I hope you get the whole thing up soon so you can continue on. I dying to know what happens next! |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 14:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well written, in other words, I love it! Trunks n' Goten are hot in thisssss! I have got a lot of reading to do! Tallyhoo~! o0' |
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