| "Price of Power" Reviews/Comments [ 60 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 13:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
Well, MM is working - where is the new chapter?? God you need a decent beta reader - some people just take forever!!!
I LOVE this story, and I LOVE Goten - he's every inch his gorgeous grandfathers boy... :D
Speaking of his gorgeous grandfather... *sigh*... I like your handle on his character... *sigh*... he really needs a bigger role in this...
Ah well, great story - great ideas as usual... :D |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2003 16:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I have to say, Goten reminds me a lot of Vegeta... maybe that's why I like him so much in this fic. And who is this Q? Very interesting... but next chapter better have some VEGETA! |
Reviewed By: LiL Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2003 19:16 PDT
Comment/Review:
omg! please update soon!!! sooooo gooooood.....must read more @.@
lol :p
yeah good stuff
LiL Elf |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 17:00 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good. Goten gets to keep Marron. Now, if you could just do something about that sniveling little brat Bra. And oh yeah, Vegeta is PERFECT in this fic! |
Reviewed By: aquaprincess On: July 20, 2003 10:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original.. I've never read about Pan being a slave.. Definitely catchy~.. Update fast please..If possible please notice me when updated at:
fanfictionlover@hotmail.com..
THanks tons.. Great story.. |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 17:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Didn't mean to leave two reviews the last chapter, t'was my puter skrewin' up! *Speakin' of skrewin'-licks lips*, The Goten/Marron scene was very Yummy!! We even got a hard Goku! *shrieks in delight!!* |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 16:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woof, woof, barrkkk, Owwwwwwweeee! I absolutely LOVE how HARD Goten is in thisssssss!!!! Love, those Hard Saiya-jin Men!*Shudders* Saiya-jin Men built- RAM TOUGH!! *heh..* |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 16:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woof, woof, barrkkk, Owwwwwwweeee! I absolutely LOVE how HARD Goten is in thisssssss!!!! Love, those Hard Saiya-jin Men!*Shudders* Sayia-jin Men built- RAM TOUGH!! *heh..* |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 15:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this has me on the edge of my seat! I'm readin' mo' now!!!!!!
*Cookies to your beta too!!!!*=* |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 18:02 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! But you know, I've been thinking a lot about this and one thing has become crystal clear to me...
GOTEN BELONGS WITH MARRON!
MARRON! MARRON! MARRON! MARRON! MARRON!
Ahem... just a suggestion of course... |
Reviewed By: Sade Rose On: June 30, 2003 09:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, huh now you got it going good work |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 10:31 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So now it's not just Bulma that's surrounded by sexy Saiya-jin, it's Pan and Marron, too. And my earlier review meant to say Bra and Marron. I take it back though, now that I see what a little trick Bra is. It has to be Goten and Marron...
I think an hourly update would be nice, ne? ;) |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 22:09 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, what I wouldn't give to have Pan's problem!
Great chapter! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 16:36 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Long live King Vegeta!!!!
Trunks got what he wanted, didn't he??? Well, sort of...
Please don't let Goten end up with that brat Bra! I don't know why, but I REALLY want him with Marron!
Great chapter, as always! |
Reviewed By: Pauliesmom [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 15:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! Poor poor Panny. *snicker* |
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