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Reviewed By: Deme O-o On: February 10, 2005 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.. that was damn good! It was a bit confusing seeing as how it was all one big paragraph, but I dealt. xD Update soon =3
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl (not logged in) On: February 09, 2005 23:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay an update! *danses* It's been soo long too. A very deliciously kinky chapter. lol. Very interesting. I loved it, the content was just satifying to read. ^_^ I just like to point out that this particular chapter was a bit hard to read with some typos and that the chapter was in one big paragraph, perhaps you need to do a little formatting and editing on this one? Well, I can't read anymore of your updates today, but hopefully I will get around to them this weekend. Write more soon. See ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: anubiset (of course I`m here) On: February 09, 2005 20:25 CST
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Do you know how long I waited. Oh well. I love this story. I know I shouldn`t, but come on. Ryou is hot and so is Marik.
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Reviewed By: Ko-Ursagi On: November 28, 2004 00:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Please do not regard this as a flame, but I think it is very unlikely that Ryou would fall in love with Marik after how he was treated. He says so himself in one of the very early chapter (one or two maybe...can't remember) that he could never love Marik. Then he does. It just doesn't quite work in my mind. I also think his reaction to Seto's advances are very off target. Ryou claims that he could forgive Marik for hurting him while drunk, but then when Seto drunkenly hurts him, it's unforgivable and Bakura and Malik go all vigilante. Ryou forgives Malik for hurting him, repeatedly, but not Seto? I would have thought Seto stopping also would have meant more to Ryou, since Marik never would. I had hoped Ryou would come to his senses, drop Marik, and hook up with Seto. But then, perhaps that's just the Euroshipper in me. :) Your fics are very original and I do like them very much. Please keep writing and updating.
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 17:20 CDT
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Ok, I'm only on Chap 18... but i was reading your beginning saying that someone was upset over Poetry.com? My best friend entered a contest with them, and she won and was published... it was in their spring book this year, and not only that but she was lucky enough to be on the first page! If only I had her talent... *sigh* It's not a scam, not in the least.
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Reviewed By: damn gawd thing doesnt let me write finish a gawd damn review >< (drk_hikari) On: September 30, 2004 06:19 CDT
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Hey!!! Hm...I know you uploaded this a while back...But i was kinda busy so I didn't have time to read it. *Sobs* Aw... poor Ryou... If I were him, and my parents found out I were bi (which I am NOT going to let them know) I'd literraly be dead. ._. Well...I hope at least Ryou's dad will be understanding...
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Reviewed By: drk_hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 06:15 CDT
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Hey!!! Hm...I know you uploaded this a while back...
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Reviewed By: drk_hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 06:15 CDT
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Hey!!! Hm...I know you uploaded this a while back...
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Title: it's me K.M.G.
Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So sad of Seto to have left Mokuba. *huggles mokuba* Hopefully he'll be ok. Also, great little scene there. Lemony goodness! ^_^ Another great ch. Ud soon. Till next time. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Valea On: August 03, 2004 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man it was so sad, Seto really coudlnt be saved. And I just ahd a bad time and this scence made me feel oh so very much better! Loved the whip part, it was awesomely great! Can't get enough of those dominated scences....anywho I hope it all works out for them and Mokuba can ajust! Good stuff!
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Title: meepu
Reviewed By: Deme, stupid MM won't let me log in and stay in! On: August 03, 2004 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm still sad for Seto, poor Mokuba. Anyway, what a perfectly delicious scene.. ^^ Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon, thankie.
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Reviewed By: Kuramaandhiei4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 15:43 CDT
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It's me again ^.^; Well, I haven't read this either (I'm getting bad with this *blushes* I'm reviewing things without reading them) but I'll get to it!!! I read through the part about your friend getting her poem published. Poetry.com I've heard is a scam, but I doubt it. I've been published before, just this year too. I was one of the top 33 amateur poets in the country, I think. I was also invited to Washington DC and Pennsylvania to read my poem in front of an audience. Tell your friend congrats even though I'm sure this was probably a while ago ^^; Still waiting for an update on Business Hours!!!! and Family Love, too! ^^
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 16:07 CDT
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Good Stuff, write more! ^^
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 16:04 CDT
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Mm, good lemon chappie. ^_^ Loved it. Glad you finally updated this one. I miss ur fics on ff.net. It's easier to keep track of ur updates on there. *sighs* Oh well. At least I can still read them here. Ud soon. Ja ne.
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Title: jfiasfast
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 10:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!!!! We got a REALLY yummy lemon ^^ Been waiting quite a while for one. Especially since it's been about Seto's death and his will and all that other jazz. Heh heh.. nice ^^ Please update this soon. I guess you could call the lemon a life saver, I don't think I could've read more about this sad, sappy stuff. Lol..
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