| "The Exfoilation of Perenial Beings" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Reviewed By: Moonlitspire On: July 23, 2003 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No! how could you just leave it right THERE?? you evil cliffie writer you...^_~
You're story is sooo good! ...although...that last chapter was just about the most revolting stuff i've ever read...it's all good. The suspense is killing me. Please please write more soon! byyee! |
Reviewed By: Kannie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 17:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Font poor yugi........alrite u got me hung....I WANNA C THE NEXT CHAPPI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *pouts*.........i crave for more!!!!.............................plz updtae soon.......><
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Reviewed By: stupid kid04 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thats it? No more precious chapters? *Pouts* gee, what I'd do . . . oh well, great job so far! |
Reviewed By: Zee On: July 23, 2003 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it is amazing. It's so different from every other vampire story I have read from yugioh. I like how you make Yugi a strong person and not just some whiny wimp like most authors do. He can hold his own which is very original. I can't wait until you get another chapter out. Your grammar and spelling is also great just a few mistakes here or there that. Good job I cannot wait for another chapter!! |
Reviewed By: Moonchild On: July 23, 2003 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Things are getting more and more interesting. Please don't make us wait for too long. |
Reviewed By: Shade A On: July 23, 2003 08:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was the most vile and disgusting thing that I have ever read in my life... I liiiike it *giggles insanely*
On a lighter-
Voice inside Shade's head: and on a less INSANE NOTE!!!
Shut up, you. On a lighter note *glares at VISH, as if daring it to interrupt* this is very well written! I like it!!! I hope you continue soon!
~Shade and Vish~ |
Reviewed By: StarMagician [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 03:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
I just read chapter 10 and wow, you're good.
This is one of the best vamp fic I have read. It's very different.
Please update soon!
Cliffhangers kill me. |
Reviewed By: Meaty Mc Meatness On: July 23, 2003 02:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yumm... all that description of blood and meat gives me a hankering for some filet mignon.
*sees everyone staring* WHAT!?!?! |
Reviewed By: Cherreh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 01:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay, an update! I lovie this story. More Yami/Yugi-ness please! Update soon!
~~~Cherry~~~ |
Reviewed By: Cherreh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 03:33 CDT
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Ohh. More Yami/Yugi-ness please! Lemon... :) Please update soon. I love this story. :P
~~~Cherry~~~ |
Reviewed By: Megumi05 On: July 21, 2003 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice ^^
keep going, I want to see more Yami/Yugi lemon ~_^
Is Yami a vampire or am I reading too far into things?
I like your style of writing, I haven't read a good lemon like that in a while ^^ |
Reviewed By: Worsel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! I love this story, It's awesome! I always end up forgetting whatever has gone wrong in my day and just laugh when I read this. Thanks for writing such a spiffy story!
~Lossa Love~ |
Reviewed By: Ryasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 22:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ooooooooooo! *squeal* Good, good, good, wonderful! I love your story! I really like Yugi's character and that he can be a bit of a mass murderer (of vampires)! *imagines Yugi with guns and knives* Hehe!*snickers* But ya know, I keep thinking that Yami's a vampire. Hmmmmm... Anyway, update soon! Soon, ya hear! |
Reviewed By: Silver Lily aka Blood Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear GODS you have to continue this. I LOVE it! REALLY!!! I do I do I do!!! |
Reviewed By: Yuki Tenshi On: July 16, 2003 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe I missed such a good story for so long, so anyway, I spent a couple of hours reading everything...
Hmm...I did have a sneaking suspicion about Yami being a vamp from the first time you mentions him having cool skin. Maybe you sent out subliminal messages in your summaries? lol It really explains a lot though! His cool skin, his...seductiveness, his reaction when Yuugi told him about the massacre, his not going out in daylight on weekends, AND his morning perkiness ^__^...maybe he just gets up early cuz he cant leave Yuugi's house after dawn with the sun and all.
Wonder why Yuugi hasnt figured out all this yet...Oh well. I can't wait to see his reaction when he finds out he has 2 vamp stalkers. HAHA! I can't wait for more! Update soon! Oh yes, and great story! |
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