| "The Exfoilation of Perenial Beings" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Reviewed By: howdypartna On: June 24, 2003 19:10 CDT
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O.O WoW! you've go my interest. lets make a deal. you update soon and i'll read and review, then you update again and i'll read and review, you update, i'll read and review. update, read, review, update, read, review, update, read, review, etc....its a never ending cycle! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2003 18:53 CDT
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This is really good. I like it. I hope you post more soon! |
Reviewed By: Shadow-Specter [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2003 10:57 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa Yami is really forward and direct, that is for sure ^^; Please continue...this story is really good so far...and OH YES! A lemon!!! Yeahhhhh!!! Update soon please!! |
Reviewed By: Saphirerose [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2003 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pretty cool. I also have not heard of a vampire fanfic with Yuugi as a bikerider and a teacher. Nifty! Please continue soon. |
Reviewed By: Yugi_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2003 05:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes an update!!! I waited for this to happen. I will be waiting for the next chap, and definitely the lemon!!!!!!
Great fic and hope you update soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2003 03:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Excellent! Possibly one of the best vampire fix I've ever read! Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Kalea2882 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!! |
Reviewed By: BleedingAngel&SilentDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 03:33 CDT
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whee! You've updated! I'm so happy! I assume you know I'm gonna' become a loyal follower with this 'ere piece o' writin' ^_~
Can't wait until the third chappie is up and running. Though, I'm probably getting ahead of myself since you've just recently finished the second chapter. heh heh. Well, I'll wait!
By the way, I love the way you've developed Yugi's character. I've seen one too many fanfictions with him portrayed as this wimpy, naive little chicken shit, when clearly he is nothing of the sort. Let's just say I get a bit more than huffy when people dare be so disrespectful to my precious Yugi-kun.
Can you tell I love him to pieces? x.x
*giggle* anywhoo, I best be goin'. It's 4:38 AM and I've got school in less than three hours. *nervous chuckle* |
Reviewed By: Jade On: June 22, 2003 19:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting story idea. I like it, please write more. It would be interesting to see this go further. |
Reviewed By: BleedingAngel&SilentDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 16:14 CDT
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Please, continue. And, don't feel this story is too inadequete because of the minimal amount of reviews! I'm beginning to notice that fabulous writers just don't get enough feedback on this site. I suppose it's the only thing I find upsetting about those who come to mediaminer.
It jus' pisses me off so much X.o;;
So, please go on and make the next chapter before I combust! *falls over* |
Reviewed By: the shadow girl On: June 20, 2003 09:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update you have a great start on your story. |
Reviewed By: StarMagician [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 02:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yami is a vampire?
Wooow. |
Reviewed By: RyuArashi On: July 23, 2003 03:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!!! *bows* First off, let me apologize....for overlooking one of the best Vampire fics involving the yugoh cast...It's very well written, and original... I can't believe i've been passing it by...By Ra, I'm off to print all the pages to this fic asap...Make sure you update soon, or else... |
Reviewed By: Moonlitspire On: July 24, 2003 12:50 CDT
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*mouth hangs wide open* No! we have to wait another few torturous days to see what happens next! *grumbles* lol
Anyway...love the chapter! your story has amazing dialogue and you have such a way with words.
Oh yes, and hurry up and POST POST POST!! XD Bye! |
Reviewed By: anon On: June 23, 2003 21:33 CDT
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shway story. I would luv it if you continued, but I don't know you and you don't know me so we wouldn't want you to be doing any favors me. but then again i was kinda disappointed at seeing the word LEMON, but not getting any. so make up your mind update soon....or not. |
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