| "Unexpected Allies I: How to Train a Taiyoukai" Reviews/Comments [ 111 ] |
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Reviewed By: DeathDagger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 04:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a good story!!! I can't believe that Naraku thought that Sesshomaru was there to help him!!! That's a laugh!!! Please email me to tell me of some more of your stories and the sequel to this story so that I can read them and tell you how wonderful they were!!! My email address is Orca48235@yahoo.com please write to me because this story ws the bomb:-)
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Title: 2
Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 00:02 CST
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Reviewed By: ToraYoukai On: December 13, 2003 22:42 CST
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I really like this story so far. I've just gotten done with chapter nine and I have to ask. What happened to the other children? o.O;; Did they die along with the mikos?
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Title: 1
Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 22:19 CST
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Title: Hello!
Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 16:46 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story!!!!! However it's says on your summary that you are completed. However(again), You said in the chaper Chapter Fifteen: My Father be Damned / You're Miko is in Danger! that the next chapter will be 'Chosen, the Tosusaiga's True Master' I'm confused, although there could be something wrong with my computer. I don't know but can you tell me what's going on?
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Reviewed By: chibimethos On: December 10, 2003 14:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finish it!!
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Reviewed By: Fluffy_Fan22 On: November 17, 2003 23:32 CST
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Great story
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Reviewed By: Zira_FireAngel On: November 17, 2003 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooookkkkk. I am going to tell you the blunt and utter truth about this fanfic. Also remember, I cannot tell a lie. I absolutely and truly *drumroll* LOVED THIS FANFIC!!!!! It was so good I mean I can't beleeve how you came up w/ this story or idea *continues to gush about how gr8 the fanfic was for about three hours* This is the best story I have read in soooooooo long. You are truly an inspiration. I'm also in the process of writing my own Sess/Kag story. It's going to be called "Thoughts of love" hopefully. Neways can't wait to read some of your other works. Plz hurry with the updates with ice cream on top? *holds out ice cream with a puppy-dog pout* If you don't feel my wrath!!!
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Reviewed By: IMPORTANT On: November 17, 2003 15:51 CST
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IMPORTANT YOU WROTE THIS CHAPTER IN THE WRONG STORY
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Reviewed By: (fireash) On: November 17, 2003 14:29 CST
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good chapter but a little short but hey i cant complain. all of mine are very short. thanks for the update and can't wait for the next one.
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Reviewed By: Sesshyangel On: November 17, 2003 13:48 CST
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Um, r u sure that u updated the right fic SF? Hmm, Yeah, ur chappies have been getting shorter, butit never takes u that long to update ne ways. Drats, Sesshou is supposed to be free. but he's still in a cage...
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Reviewed By: Me.. On: November 17, 2003 11:30 CST
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Ahh... SF, shouldn't this be at the 3rd installment of the story???
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Reviewed By: mars marmalade On: November 17, 2003 01:12 CST
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first off i absolutely love this story, but your chapters seem to keep getting shorter. anyway the only real thing i have to say about this is that you may want to double check the story title to make sure it's the right title. you update "how to train" not "trial". i had a friend asking me a whole lot of questions about this story cause they just started reading it and got real confused.
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Title: new chappie
Reviewed By: sesshie's fan On: November 02, 2003 01:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have sent a review about 2 months ago.I neeeed to read the next chapter. this is so good. its driving me crazy.write another chapter plzzzz
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Title: UPDATE!!!
Reviewed By: SaiyanPrincessSesshysgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 19:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!! I SHALL LOVE YOU FOR ETERNITY AND MORE IF YOU DO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PWEASE, I WOV YOU*puppy eyes and pout*!
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