| "Unexpected Allies I: How to Train a Taiyoukai" Reviews/Comments [ 111 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cj On: July 12, 2003 10:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a good chapter! I just can't wait until the next chapter. And I bet that Inu Yasha is going to get interested in Kagome again since she is stronger. Back off Inu Yasha! |
Reviewed By: Aira^o^ On: July 12, 2003 05:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! this is one hell of a fic alright! Love the disguise part! Keep writing!
Sesshou finally fall for Kagome, that's a very good sign too |
Reviewed By: Chihiro Kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 14:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG!!!
There's more right?
There's no need to panick about more right?
heh heh just kidding.
Kag: So when do I get to say SIT DOWN, boys in
front of everybody.
Me: Maybe soon. Depends on the Author, Kag.
Kag: AWWW *WHINES*
Sess: You will not say or demand such a thing while I, Sesshoumaru still lives. (says pointing
at me and Kag)
Inu: Yeah me too.
Me + Kag: *WHINES* AWWWWWW *POUTS* HMPH
Me: Well continue writing |
Reviewed By: Lynn On: July 10, 2003 10:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It says part 1 so you're writing more right. I mean, you dont want me chasing after you with a long pointy stick do you. I think my encouragement is done here. Now, who havent i finishe torturing today.. ^^ Really good though! |
Reviewed By: Paige On: July 10, 2003 06:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please finish chap. 13 and go on to the end....please. i really like this fanfic!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Chihiro Kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 20:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey ho!!!!
I would like to know,
Would there be another?
Wating since forever...
not liking...
waiting...
I want another chapter!!!
seeming like forever...
to make something so good,
Way ta go dude.
Hope U like. Note very good but still U get what
I mean in this not so good poem.
Hope you make more....
CIA...!!! |
Reviewed By: Sesshoumaruboi On: July 16, 2003 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is really good. There better be more, I am getting really excited to read what happens. You should keep on writing stories cause I think you have a gift to write fanfics and who knows, u could be a famous fanfic writer. Well i guess that is it for now. And please continue writing this story me and other people want to know what happens next. Bye. |
Reviewed By: Inuma Sancton On: July 09, 2003 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please post and or finish chap 13 i am really injoying your story |
Reviewed By: kagomesirene [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2003 14:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this chapter and can`t wait to read more so update soon!
I wanna know what Sesshou is going to do and what`s happening to Kag!
Ja ne
* kagomesirene*
Beside there are many many many very good Sess/Kag stories out there, but they`re almost all on ffn.et!
I dunno why but it seems that the most Sess/Kag-fans/authors publish their stories on ff.net and the Inu/Kag`s are on MM.org?WHY???
Well I made a list on my website(list is not complete yet),but if you want to, look out for "fanstuff" on my page(it`s a german side so you`ll don`t understand much more beside this list)! |
Reviewed By: MoonBunny14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go KAGOME! YAEH!! Continue and update fast!!! This story is great!! Hope you update soon!! I cant wait till the next chapter (chapter(s) perferably)!! I luv this story!! UPDATE ASAP! :) |
Reviewed By: kagomesirene [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 17:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow as I flip through ff.net and MM.org searching for your story I`m suddenly utterly surprised!
One moment I´m so very happy that chapter 10 is out on ff.net , start my review ,and the next moment I spot the next chapters already on MM.org!Well what to say?!That happens if you`re to lazy and forget to read your schedule! Here is my rewiew for chapter 10 cause I had no time to go on reading till now!
What a great chapter!
So Kagome is now under Sesshous protecting! YAY!
It starts to get more serious between the two!
I wonder what Inuyasha is going to say when he finds out about Sesshou´s “claim”(even if it`s just a claim to protect her nothing more so far!!)!
I`m sure he would be really shocked ,should they encounter some youkai which refuse to fight them because of Kag! HAHA I can almost see his stunned face!
By the way isn`t Inu able to sense Sess on Kagome ,he merged his magic to her blood after all, or does it just function when she wears the headband?
Yay that`s going to be fun!
Inuyasha won`t have much fun with Kagome from now on! Finally she had the strength to stand up against him and to give him a piece of her mind! Well Kag sure shocked him almost to death as she told him she can do what she wants to do(especially the part with finding Sesshou and screw him ‘till the cows come home!That was more than great! Actually I almost laughed my ass off after the first shock of course!
I have to say that I completely forgot that Kag didn`t free Sesshou from the necklace ,too! I wonder if she`s actually willing to free him?! It might be useful in the future(haha! Subduing poor Sesshou whenever she wants, but no she won`t do that to him, after all he`s not acting without thinking like some other hotheaded hanyou! )
Can`t wait to read the next chapter and what`s going on with this ominous new sword!
!
Ja ne
* kagomesirene * |
Reviewed By: kagomesirene [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 17:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow as I flip through ff.net and MM.org searching for your story I`m suddenly utterly surprised!
One moment I´m so very happy that chapter 10 is out on ff.net , start my review ,and the next moment I spot the next chapters already on MM.org!Well what to say?!That happens if you`re to lazy and forget to read your schedule! Here is my rewiew for chapter 10 cause I had no time to go on reading till now!
What a great chapter!
So Kagome is now under Sesshous protecting! YAY!
It starts to get more serious between the two!
I wonder what Inuyasha is going to say when he finds out about Sesshou´s “claim”(even if it`s just a claim to protect her nothing more so far!!)!
I`m sure he would be really shocked ,should they encounter some youkai which refuse to fight them because of Kag! HAHA I can almost see his stunned face!
By the way isn`t Inu able to sense Sess on Kagome ,he merged his magic to her blood after all, or does it just function when she wears the headband?
Yay that`s going to be fun!
Inuyasha won`t have much fun with Kagome from now on! Finally she had the strength to stand up against him and to give him a piece of her mind! Well Kag sure shocked him almost to death as she told him she can do what she wants to do(especially the part with finding Sesshou and screw him ‘till the cows come home!That was more than great! Actually I almost laughed my ass off after the first shock of course!
I have to say that I completely forgot that Kag didn`t free Sesshou from the necklace ,too! I wonder if she`s actually willing to free him?! It might be useful in the future(haha! Subduing poor Sesshou whenever she wants, but no she won`t do that to him, after all he`s not acting without thinking like some other hotheaded hanyou! )
Can`t wait to read the next chapter and what`s going on with this ominous new sword!
!
Ja ne
* kagomesirene * |
Reviewed By: jessica On: July 07, 2003 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think you would do great at anything you write. I hope you update really soon. |
Reviewed By: Anonymous On: July 07, 2003 13:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Love it! Update! Now, dont get me into my threatning side...>>;; |
Reviewed By: Me.. On: July 07, 2003 08:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CAN I ASK SOMETHING???? WHY IS IT THAT YOU ALREADY HAVE CHAPPIES 11 AND 12 HERE WHILE U ONLY HAD CHAPPIE 10 AT FFNET???? IS THE FFNET DATABASE ACTING FREAKY AGAIN AND WON'T LET YOU UPLOAD OR SOMETHIN????
POOR DOGS THOUGH....SIT & DOWN.....hmm...... |
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