| "Unexpected Allies I: How to Train a Taiyoukai" Reviews/Comments [ 111 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sesshyangel On: July 02, 2003 09:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lovely chapter. I love the part when Sess falls out of the tree. She did forget to take it off didn't she? Or did she do it on purpose? What would have been funnier is if the group saw him sitting like that!
Lucky Kagome! She has both brothers sitting for her at her beck and call.
YAY! Go Kagome! She's finally standing up for herself and no longer tolerating the unforgivable way IY has been treating her! |
Reviewed By: Sesshyangel On: July 02, 2003 08:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What were you thinking?!?
I have waited and waited and waited on fanfiction just to read your stories and here you are Updating here on MM and Without telling me!!! For shame SF!
Btw whats w/ the formating? It's alittle too big for the window. Oh well. An update is an update.
IF you continue this, then what's the point of putting you on my author alert list?
Yeah, well, here's my review:
Awesome, great, love it as usual! q(^_^)p |
Reviewed By: jessica On: July 01, 2003 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic. god i hope you update really soon again. Are you going to put a lime or lemon in this story? |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 23:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great writing when Kagome took Inuyasha down a few notches! And a third sword...very interesting, I like that idea (^_^) |
Reviewed By: Kohaku Chihiro On: July 01, 2003 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
COOL! COOL!
Enjoyed it a lot. So wat happens next.
Can't wait da the next chaps to come.
And I so love the way Kag still has control on Sess and the way she speaks to Inu is da coolest. Makes me want to laugh.
I love Sess/Kag
Continue your work.... |
Reviewed By: Inu hime and lady of the West On: July 01, 2003 15:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
More! More!
I love your story so far...
Please continue.
Continue your work and may more praises befall your work. |
Reviewed By: ren On: June 29, 2003 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your stories are so awsome i can't hardly wait till you finish then please i need to know what happens. |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm in love with your fics. No, seriously, I am (^_^) You have original ideas, and write the fics very well. It's not often that I find a writer with fics that I enjoy so much...I've read 2 by you today and many times I have literally laughed out loud at parts. That is a rarity for me. |
Reviewed By: Weebo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Weebo walks by noticing the title and decides to read* Finally I can put this *raises whip* into good use. HAHAHAHAHH!
Another amazing fic so far. I drool again at your ideas. I'll be back when you update XD
- Weebo |
Reviewed By: Tenshi no Yami On: June 27, 2003 09:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
*blink blink* Sesshou cried? *big ole grin* KAWAII!!! Really it was. I loved it. Close call for Kagome and Rin though. Dude, I can just see him in his inu form, sitting on the ground like that. I love doggies. Specially fluffy ones. FLUFFY-CHAN! *glomps Sesshou,who is now known as Fluffy-chan* C u next update! |
Reviewed By: Abunai Mori On: June 27, 2003 04:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, that is a weird title, ne? heh heh... omg! I love you! ~huggles sf~ Thank you, thank you, thank you! That was so freaking cool! You are so freaking cool! Fanfiction is so freaking cool!
Wow, thanks for the link, I don't know what I would do without you and you stories! You are the best!
I wish I could write like you, but all my stories 'die,' so to speak. ^_^' lol. Ok, hurry with the next chapter! I can't wait!
Ja ne!
Abunai Mori
p.s. Thank you for the e mail! |
Reviewed By: Sugarhighs:P [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 04:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, thanks for sending me that e-mail. I was sitting at the comp all day (well...not really all day) waiting for an update...I must have checked your schedule on ff.net at least 5 times...
It's okay. I know it's stupid when they kick you off for no reason on ff. But I've been itching to know what would happen if I pressed the 'report story' button...
Just curious...I didn't do it though!
~Jessica ^_^ |
Reviewed By: The Lecturess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*drools* Must have more. Must have lemons. Yummmmmmm! *unzombies out* What oh! I love it. |
Reviewed By: Soudesuka_Shurikens On: July 01, 2003 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't think anyones going to get any...that's beside inuyasha and kikyot...hint hint sess/kag.
this is a very cool story. and i mean cool. i'm hooked. update soon and keep on trucking.
did i mention this story is too cool. |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 09:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gosh!!!!!! if i could give you a better overall rating and enjoyment factor i would!!!!!! because with the story you have is the bomb!!!!!!!! in simple i LOOOOOOOVED it!!!!!!!!!!!! please continue!! and i just love the little 'side stories' with you and the gang!!! there soooo hularious!!!!!
(is that how you spell it?) well N E ways please update soon!!!!!!!!!! |
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