| "Hunters At Midnight" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Title: oooo
Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 15:07 CST
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ooooo... who's Nebula i wonder...? can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 16:25 CST
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i like how the story's going so far but if you really need some idea here some: 1. you need to bring Joye and Mai back into this cuz they've been out in that latest chapters, like will Mai escape? Will she fall for joey? 2. Also what about the others went about to get into some kind of fight? If the girls win will they take a hostage and question him? Will the the girls find the castle? Will they try bringing Arora back to normal? Will Isis, Pernia, adn Arora have to face them in a battle? 3.Can Arora be changed back? What if later on she slowly starts to act like her old self and Yami finds this out and tries to do something about it.>>>So yea those are my suggestions and if your still having trouble IM me and I give you more ideas. Hope they help! ^_^
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Title: New chapter
Reviewed By: Lady Nightshade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 13:10 CST
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Title: Class Chapter 13
Reviewed By: FlamingSolitude On: November 29, 2003 05:51 CST
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Class Chapter. Update soon, I want to know what is gonig to happen to Isis and Mai! And Arora! ^_^
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Title: flow
Reviewed By: FlowerKitsune On: November 27, 2003 22:45 CST
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Cool
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Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 21:58 CST
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oooo Pernia sure showed him! You go gurl! Please update soon!
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Title: New chapter
Reviewed By: Lady Nightshade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 18:59 CST
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Title: Sudeictive Chances?!
Reviewed By: Flaming Solitude On: November 17, 2003 10:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT SEDUCTIVE CHANCES?! I WISH!! ANYWAYS, I LOOOOOVVVVEEE THIS STORY TO BITS AND PLEASE CONTINUE A.S.A.P!! ^-^ ^_^ Get on with the next chapter pleeze- I'm going insane. O_O
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Reviewed By: Lady Nightshade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 22:31 CST
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I love how for some reason sometimes reviews don't show up until you do this
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Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 19:34 CST
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nice chapter update soon
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Reviewed By: Lady Nightshade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 18:07 CST
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New Chapter
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Title: Hunters...
Reviewed By: Love_Girl On: October 24, 2003 02:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is quite a...well it has a very good story line in it- I'm well impressed! And me, I'm not easily impressed these days...Keep it up...I'm loking forward to Joey and Mai!
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Title: ur right
Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 18:18 CDT
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ur right that was a lot of talking but it was an awesome chapter! I can't wait for the next chap.!
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Reviewed By: Lady Nightshade [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 17:14 CDT
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new chapter
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Title: hime^_^
Reviewed By: Sailor_Chaos On: October 17, 2003 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*squeals* I love this fic. I love vampires as well and I think its great that someone desides to write about them. Your writing is wonderful. I hope to see more chappies up soon. ^_^
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