| "A Fragile Love" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: eagle8819 On: July 09, 2003 05:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good. Improvements can certainly be made to this, but I will say this is good.
Take your time, don't rush, and the next chapter should be far more excellent ;) |
Reviewed By: Koryu On: July 07, 2003 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good. I like it a lot.You should've had Keitaro head to Mackinaw City in Michigan so he could've gotten a photo of the longest suspension bridge in the great USA. Just one little quirk: I've not finished Love Hina yet (still have the two specials and Love Hina Again), but since when was Shinobu's love of Keitaro only brotherly? |
Reviewed By: Cocrete_KaOn On: July 06, 2003 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you going to write more or not |
Reviewed By: anubis On: July 02, 2003 19:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
u must hurry and make the next chapter. this is a very good story. i read alot of storys and this a good one by far. so dont forget about this fic. write on my friend. lol |
Reviewed By: Concrete_KaOn On: July 01, 2003 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey man I love fanfic so far keep it going and by the I love the detail of each part of the story
I'm a sucker for romance
See ya ^_^ |
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