| "A Fragile Love" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 12:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this,immenselly, keep going, is this going to be a Mitsune& makoto& okinowan chick get Keitaro fanfiction? Well if not i stillam summarilly impressed with the subtle byplay of emotios Congratulations!
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Reviewed By: boss_frog On: November 25, 2003 14:04 CST
Comment/Review:
i dont see why everyone is in love with this fic your spelling, grammer, and sentance structure suck. i find it almost imposible to read this thing.
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Reviewed By: Grand_Crusader [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 14:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The writing of the fanfic, the style, spelling, originality, and such are great. However, you came to an incorrect conclusion. As of the last manga (Which was 14, BTW), Keitaro married...NARUSEGAWA NARU! Just like the anime. Other than that, you've got great work here, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Zauriel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Keitaro/Mitsune pairing was not a bad idea. I really like the way you describe their sex scene. It was damn erotic.
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Reviewed By: S.M. On: August 21, 2003 21:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
can't wait for more ,please update as soon as possible |
Reviewed By: Salvador R, Balleza On: August 13, 2003 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's nicely done, not to mention that Keitaro's new attitude is a good change from his original attitude, he's more mature and capable now. Not to mention that the girls are actually seeing him differently and with changing emotions. |
Reviewed By: Eastsidegeorgiaboy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurry hurry Hurry. Update. I can't wait. LOL see ya. |
Reviewed By: Yue, Master of Darkness On: August 02, 2003 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
All of the chapters were enjoyable to read. It would be awsome to see more chapters in the future. |
Reviewed By: Sinu-Yasha On: August 01, 2003 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this chapter but i have one question. Does Keitaro love Mutsumi as a friend or more then a friend, i found her reaction to be very strange.Update soon though because you got me hooked! |
Reviewed By: Al Dragon-Heart On: July 30, 2003 12:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best LH fanfics i have ever read. WELL DONE!!! Keep up the good work!!! |
Reviewed By: Concrete KaOn On: July 28, 2003 02:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ch 4 was ok but the part with Mutsumi was kinda scary cuz I`ve always wanted to see that kind of thing with Naru |
Reviewed By: Nightmare-Dragoon On: July 16, 2003 10:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since I've read most of the manga of Love Hina I wasn't expecting the emotions of Keitaro to become so adult like with his childish emotions. In the next chapter try to have each of the girls try to get Keitaro to explain to them why he left but if the girls individually had a hand in making him leave. If you want more ideas from me my e-mail is Miayes@aol.com. P.S I hope the next chapter is good! |
Reviewed By: Concrete KaOn On: July 12, 2003 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please hurry with your next one I love this fanfic |
Reviewed By: Concrete KaOn On: July 12, 2003 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please hurry with your next one I love this fanfic |
Reviewed By: anubis On: July 12, 2003 01:40 CDT
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hey u got to update this fic fast it is a good story so plz hurry. i must read more about it so HURRY UP!!!!!!!!!! LOL |
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