| "A Fragile Love" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: Glaedr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 23:06 CDT
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Aug. 05* They really need to add an editing thing...Sorry for the second Review.
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Reviewed By: Glaedr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice story with few typos, though I wish you had finished it. Though doubtful at this point as the last chapter was from Dec. 05.
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Title: A new r/rer
Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You'd better update soon... By the way... Kanako's pet is named Kuro not Kero K U R O o0k? UPDATE!!!!!!!!
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Title: More Updates
Reviewed By: EternalFreedom [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been waiting for new updates for almost months now. The new update involving Kanako is great, but more will be even better! This story is way beyond awesome and it's a total shame that no new updates are up. This is too good to leave alone for too long, more updates please!
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Title: CH.14
Reviewed By: Peacemaker [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The newest installment is here and I am quite impressed. It was very well done and now that Kanako's here things could get interesting. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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Reviewed By: Lina19 On: August 24, 2005 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
My only complaint is the sound effects. They seem kinda redundant, and, for me, make the story hard to follow. Aside from that, wow... It's great.
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Title: Purple Lightning
Reviewed By: romer On: July 27, 2005 17:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha...Lol...did i mention Ha! Nice one but where did you ever get Grandia 2 at?Actually who recommended it to you because I don't see a disclaimor about that and what's the word these days? Oh well let's just say COPIED!!!! Just mentioning it here but it's a good story...
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: Miroku 2258 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Fanfic but i have to say one thing NAKE IT MOTOKO come on she like needs him if he goes for NARU she like die come naru can get all the guys she wants but MOTOKO and so what if keitaro and naru get married this is a fanfic we read and write them becouse we want a read a story differnet than someone wrote it that is why and we write to make the story the way we like it
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 11:24 CDT
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Over all a very good fanfic, but please update.
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Title: hmmmmm
Reviewed By: MegaChickLightningFighterOfSomethinEVILANDDARK On: December 11, 2004 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
in truth the story has its good points, but there were three things that I didn't find realistic. 1) Kei changed so much in 1 year, but what he did accomplish should have taken longer. And the girls just forgave him like that? 2) The magic in the sword fighting. You should add something more if you're going to have the characters have magic, and that doesn't seem at all reasonalble. There is no magic in the that world, and how would Kei master his Chi so fast in one year? 3) I didn't think you wrote good details. it was better thna the normal wriing on this site, but it lacks words in places. It needs work and what has the main character become. He needs to focus on one person.
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Reviewed By: Alucard VanTepres On: November 10, 2004 01:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Thank YOU! I've been dying to see the next chapters of this story. And from the looks of it I have to admit that it's really awesome! I LOVE the new ideas you've got working here for the story, I was laughing my guts out when I first read how the girls reacted to Keitaro's return. And now, I'm both laughing and crying with joy as I looked at it again, along with the other chapters. But the idea of Haruka actually having romantic feelings for Keitaro REALLY got me interested. I can't wait to see what'll happen next. The idea of Keitaro making the promise to BOTH Naru and Mutsumi was also very original, not to mention I was loving the way the girls are acting towards Keitaro! My congratulations on this wonderful work of writing and I hope that you can finish this all. That includes your other works as well. Bye!
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Reviewed By: allin656 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 18:30 CST
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Awesome chapter, I really loved reading it. I just re-read the whole story, and I really like the new format and everything that you have done for the story. I can't wait for the next update because this story is one of the best Love Hina fanfics I've ever read. Keep writing this is absolutely amazing.
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Reviewed By: def3PO On: October 26, 2004 03:39 CDT
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i look forward to reading more chapters
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Reviewed By: Lighty On: August 09, 2004 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fic. Keep it comming.
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Reviewed By: Yaisel On: July 12, 2004 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
W00T! Sappiness! There's just not enough of it out there. The hentai part was well done, and the love stuff was nice as well. More hentai would be nice (what can I say, it appeals to my base instincts) but it's also a fine fic on it's own.
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