| "A Fragile Love" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: Salvador R, Balleza On: August 13, 2003 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's nicely done, not to mention that Keitaro's new attitude is a good change from his original attitude, he's more mature and capable now. Not to mention that the girls are actually seeing him differently and with changing emotions. |
Reviewed By: Eastsidegeorgiaboy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurry hurry Hurry. Update. I can't wait. LOL see ya. |
Reviewed By: Yue, Master of Darkness On: August 02, 2003 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
All of the chapters were enjoyable to read. It would be awsome to see more chapters in the future. |
Reviewed By: Sinu-Yasha On: August 01, 2003 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this chapter but i have one question. Does Keitaro love Mutsumi as a friend or more then a friend, i found her reaction to be very strange.Update soon though because you got me hooked! |
Reviewed By: Al Dragon-Heart On: July 30, 2003 12:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best LH fanfics i have ever read. WELL DONE!!! Keep up the good work!!! |
Reviewed By: Concrete KaOn On: July 28, 2003 02:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ch 4 was ok but the part with Mutsumi was kinda scary cuz I`ve always wanted to see that kind of thing with Naru |
Reviewed By: Nightmare-Dragoon On: July 16, 2003 10:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since I've read most of the manga of Love Hina I wasn't expecting the emotions of Keitaro to become so adult like with his childish emotions. In the next chapter try to have each of the girls try to get Keitaro to explain to them why he left but if the girls individually had a hand in making him leave. If you want more ideas from me my e-mail is Miayes@aol.com. P.S I hope the next chapter is good! |
Reviewed By: Concrete KaOn On: July 12, 2003 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please hurry with your next one I love this fanfic |
Reviewed By: Concrete KaOn On: July 12, 2003 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please hurry with your next one I love this fanfic |
Reviewed By: anubis On: July 12, 2003 01:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey u got to update this fic fast it is a good story so plz hurry. i must read more about it so HURRY UP!!!!!!!!!! LOL |
Reviewed By: eagle8819 On: July 09, 2003 05:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good. Improvements can certainly be made to this, but I will say this is good.
Take your time, don't rush, and the next chapter should be far more excellent ;) |
Reviewed By: Koryu On: July 07, 2003 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good. I like it a lot.You should've had Keitaro head to Mackinaw City in Michigan so he could've gotten a photo of the longest suspension bridge in the great USA. Just one little quirk: I've not finished Love Hina yet (still have the two specials and Love Hina Again), but since when was Shinobu's love of Keitaro only brotherly? |
Reviewed By: Cocrete_KaOn On: July 06, 2003 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you going to write more or not |
Reviewed By: anubis On: July 02, 2003 19:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
u must hurry and make the next chapter. this is a very good story. i read alot of storys and this a good one by far. so dont forget about this fic. write on my friend. lol |
Reviewed By: Concrete_KaOn On: July 01, 2003 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey man I love fanfic so far keep it going and by the I love the detail of each part of the story
I'm a sucker for romance
See ya ^_^ |
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