| "Tension" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: RaceUlfson@aol.com On: February 18, 2004 17:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Original, fascinating, and very disturbing concept. It's not the nonncon I find disturbing, it's the previous rape by the scientists of both boy's wills and psyches. I'm sorry this isn't a whole story arc, I'd love to know how Heero and Duo deal with their compulsions long term.
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Reviewed By: Hellwise [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Fantablous idea...simply fantastic and the way you pulled it off was stunning.
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Reviewed By: __Nomi__ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
My first non-con. Ever. It was a beautifully well-written fic, even if the subject matter is a little questionable (then again, yaoi in general is questionable. ^_~). I am really enjoying your writing style, though, even if this fic made me wince for poor Duo. I've never read anything like it, and I'm glad I did. Nice job. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Lilac On: July 13, 2003 19:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, this was really good!
Please write more! |
Reviewed By: Gelasia Castle [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. My. Gawd. This was the hottest fic I've read in a long time. And I have read a lot of fics. It was so well written and...and...make a sequel? Please? If you love me you'll do it. |
Reviewed By: Airen On: July 12, 2003 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
...wow. That was...good. Really well-written, but also scary as hell. I liked it in a strange twisted sort of way, but it freaked me out a great deal. I thought I spotted a sequel on the page or so before this, so I'm off to read that before I say anything else. |
Reviewed By: Suzume Tori On: July 05, 2003 04:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
.... eep. Freaky shit. **hides under a rock** I like it... it's twisted... I wish it wasn't, though... but I like it anyway, jeeze, what a freaky idea, using sexual tension to keep gundam pilots in line, and then having it backfire... |
Reviewed By: Corena On: July 04, 2003 03:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you should make another one with them making some sort of ammends for this. |
Reviewed By: lead7girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Love it! Love it! (No, not Deathscythe...the story)
Please keep it going. I love the premise behind this storyline! It is different from other fanfics I've read in that it's not sappy, OOC, or AU!
This fic ROCKS! |
