| "Vacation Blues" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: vmr On: July 05, 2003 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting story. Keep on writing.:) |
Reviewed By: Cherreh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 17:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Upddate please! Yay! Finally another HP/YGO crossover with yoi. Yay! Update soon!! |
Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this is very good! Nicely written, with smooth prose and wonderful characterization. I love the older Yugi you've created and his interaction with Yami. The scene where YY and Y meet the HP characters was very well done. The plot has caught my attention, the writing allows me to enjoy it without tons of grammar/spelling errors getting in the way, and since I'm a sucker for a good Y/YY romance, count me in for the long haul. ^_^ Looking forward to reading more... |
Reviewed By: Nicky On: July 05, 2003 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a good idea. You HAVE to continue this fic. It would be a waste to leave it hanging.
Great Fic! |
Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 14:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey--
i actually like this fic. so far. at first i was a little sketchy on the YGO/HP crossover thing (i don't really like crossovers....i think they take the structure that has been formed for each thing and rip them apart to conform. most of the time, it is poorly done and creates mayhem among characters.), but i think you've done a wonderful job merging their two worlds without taking anything away from them. oh, and i would love to see yaoi between yami and yugi (nani? no lemons? well, you can't have everything i suppose. but endless fluffiness is great too! ^__~)
keep up the great work and update soon!
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^ |
Reviewed By: C.M Aeris [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 20:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
I can't wait for the next chapter! |
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