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"Vacation Blues" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ]
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 Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 16, 2004 11:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! You updated! I really love this story, and I hope you will update again soon!
 Reviewed By: dmyamiyugi [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 15, 2004 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm sorry I didn't review your last chapter. I didn't have time after I read it...so...yeah, know I'm revewing ^^. I just LOVE you story! The person who said you update to slow...well ***** THEM!!!! I think myou update, and spending so much time to do so. Even after what happened to you, with your computer and all! That's amazing. If it were me, I wouldn't update for...like a year maybe. *does tumbs up sign* Keep up the great work, your doing a teriffic job ^^!!
 Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 14, 2004 19:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
great job!!! how long does it take Mokuba to find them?? Does Seto fallow?? lol great funny ending!!! plz update soon!!
 Title: Ahhhh....
Reviewed By: Mood [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 14, 2004 14:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's so dark...I love it! I'm reading the HPcrossover by Teedee...and if you like HP/YGO then you have got to check out http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1095253 The New Students by White Angel chan. It's very good and has a very obvious Rowling traite to the writing. Again...encouragement to continue the story...
 Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 10, 2004 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
uuuuuggggggghhhhhhh! come on! u gotta update soon so that u don't leave people in the dark!!!! come on!
 Reviewed By: Toki Mirage [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 10, 2004 14:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
I DON'T WANT FRIGGIN' COOKIES!!! YOU EVIL EVIL EVIL PERSON!!!! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!! DAMNIT!!!!!! KUSO KUSO KUSO!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: SadisticAngel_Noho [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 10, 2004 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Truly..truly wonderful.You've done well in writing it all.Its caught my interest and I was disappointed to find it over..but of course I only just found it and read the four chapters.So..understandable yet sadly I must wait..but I found when Yami fought the Death Eaters, entertaining!Its a dead give away with my name.But you did a great job and all I can say is that and keep up the great work.I'll be back to read again when you update.Ciao
 Reviewed By: Shinigami24  On: April 10, 2004 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*scream bloody murder and begin cursing into Egyptian* Argh! I knew I hate bloody cliffhangers! Anyway, liking the part when u said u made Yami sound impotent, well I finally had the chance to watch more of the anime, but lately, the episodes have been scattered, confusing the hell out of me. Anyway, in Duelist Kingdom, Yami tried to kill Seto, but Yugi fought for control. And I missed a lot of the stuff during Battle City, but he seemed tame? I read somewhere that Yugi made Yami tame, so I guess that answers ur question. I havn't read the rest of the manga, I just bought the English translation of mange #4, and soo far, Yami only made Mokuba eat the poisoned hamburger. Brr... *shivers* And I thought Bakura was sadistic... Hm, pls write a fanfic, in which Yami, Bakura and Marik team up and wreak havoc on the bad guys! I'd pay to see that. No, wait- anyone got a pic or drawing of Marik in a bunny suit? I need some blackmail material, then I'll have Marik wrapped around my finger! Cuz sometimes he refuses to cooperate, even if Malik promises- Not going there! *shakes head*
 Reviewed By: Shinigami24  On: April 10, 2004 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*scream bloody murder and begin cursing into Egyptian* Argh! I knew I hate bloody cliffhangers! Anyway, liking the part when u said u made Yami sound impotent, well I finally had the chance to watch more of the anime, but lately, the episodes have been scattered, confusing the hell out of me. Anyway, in Duelist Kingdom, Yami tried to kill Seto, but Yugi fought for control. And I missed a lot of the stuff during Battle City, but he seemed tame? I read somewhere that Yugi made Yami tame, so I guess that answers ur question. I havn't read the rest of the manga, I just bought the English translation of mange #4, and soo far, Yami only made Mokuba eat the poisoned hamburger. Brr... *shivers* And I thought Bakura was sadistic... Hm, pls write a fanfic, in which Yami, Bakura and Marik team up and wreak havoc on the bad guys! I'd pay to see that. No, wait- anyone got a pic or drawing of Marik in a bunny suit? I need some blackmail material, then I'll have Marik wrapped around my finger! Cuz sometimes he refuses to cooperate, even if Malik promises- Not going there! *shakes head*
 Reviewed By: Shinigami24  On: April 10, 2004 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*scream bloody murder and begin cursing into Egyptian* Argh! I knew I hate bloody cliffhangers! Anyway, liking the part when u said u made Yami sound impotent, well I finally had the chance to watch more of the anime, but lately, the episodes have been scattered, confusing the hell out of me. Anyway, in Duelist Kingdom, Yami tried to kill Seto, but Yugi fought for control. And I missed a lot of the stuff during Battle City, but he seemed tame? I read somewhere that Yugi made Yami tame, so I guess that answers ur question. I havn't read the rest of the manga, I just bought the English translation of mange #4, and soo far, Yami only made Mokuba eat the poisoned hamburger. Brr... *shivers* And I thought Bakura was sadistic... Hm, pls write a fanfic, in which Yami, Bakura and Marik team up and wreak havoc on the bad guys! I'd pay to see that. No, wait- anyone got a pic or drawing of Marik in a bunny suit? I need some blackmail material, then I'll have Marik wrapped around my finger! Cuz sometimes he refuses to cooperate, even if Malik promises- Not going there! *shakes head*
 Reviewed By: /Anon/  On: March 31, 2004 05:37 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Dear God...that was bloody brilliant. Carry on writing please...
 Reviewed By: DMYamiyugi [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 22, 2004 11:13 CST
Comment/Review:
This story os so good. I really like it...a hole lot. I am so sorry about what's happend with your vision and sone, and understand if you might not be updating for a while. Keep up the good work though. Belive me, you have facinating talent in writting ^_~
 Title: EVIL PERSON!!!!
Reviewed By: Toki Mirage [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 21, 2004 14:51 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
NO!!!!!!! NO!!!!!!!!! YOU EVIL PERSON!!!!!!!! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!!!! DAMNIT DAMNIT DAMNIT DAMNIT DAMNIT DAMNIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOT ONLY DID IT TAKE U LONG ENOUGH FOR U TO UPDATE, YOU HAD TO END IT _RIGHT_THERE_ YOU EVIL PERSON!!!!!! EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE OR I SHALL PLACE A CURSE UPON YOU THAT YOU WILL REGRET FOR THE REST OF YOUR LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Title: GemJewel
Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 21, 2004 13:37 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is so cool. does yami find yugi? u HAVE to continue this story!
 Title: GemJewel
Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 21, 2004 00:36 CST
Comment/Review:
this is such a cool story! i love it. i really want to know what happens. plz plz continue with this story!!!!
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