| "Vacation Blues" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vegakitty On: August 23, 2003 11:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vega: *squee!* I was glomped! I feel the love! *spins and dances*
Wufei: Will you stop that?! Didn't you read the chapter? Didn't you see the destruction and death and power?! How can you be dancing at a time like this?! *hyperventilates*
Vega: *stops and waves off-handedly* Oh pishposh, Wuffie-kins. I saw it and hit the monitor with my head leaning in. It was so cool wasn't it!
Wufei: Cool? COOL!? ARG! *stomps off*
Vega: *blinks* Don't mind him, he's just mad we ran out of cheesecake squares. Glad you like my reviews, now I'm gonna be your own little cheerleader *waves pompoms* Goooooooo Shi-koi-sama! Yah! *ponders recruting RyuArashi* |
Reviewed By: Ooahati Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like... I like. Good job so far! ^_~
~Zufluchtsort~ |
Reviewed By: Silent Sniper On: July 11, 2003 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it so far!! I want to know whats gonna happen! ^____^ Update! |
Reviewed By: Holly Trest On: July 07, 2003 13:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story is great. I can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: RyuArashi On: July 07, 2003 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shi-koi-sannnn!!!!! Where have you been?! *crying with joy* As usual, your stories are excellent...I'm sorry you have writer's block...It's the dumps, isn't it?*sighs* But I always love your stories-they're so well-written!Please update soon, ne? |
Reviewed By: Protector of love between Yami and Yugi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to update this story. I want to see what happens to Yami and Yugi and how the others will react to more shadow magic. This sotry I'm prodicting will be very interesting like all your other stories. |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 12:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
This sounds interesting so far. I hope you post more soon! I want to see what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Vegakitty On: July 05, 2003 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vega: Oh! The wonderful, amazing Shi-koi strikes again! And I agree, how many fics do you have running around unfinished?
Wufei: You're one to talk, don't you have a few as well and you don't even have a account anywhere.
Vega: *looks a bit sheepish* er... heh ^_^; Anyway! I like YGO/HP crossovers! Hurry and finish this one, it's going somewhere I like! |
Reviewed By: chipperke On: July 05, 2003 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the idea of the story, and I can't wait for the rest. I can't wait untill Harry and his friends meet Yami and Yuugi. At least they got 6 months of vaction before it went bad. |
Reviewed By: vmr On: July 05, 2003 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting story. Keep on writing.:) |
Reviewed By: Cherreh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 17:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Upddate please! Yay! Finally another HP/YGO crossover with yoi. Yay! Update soon!! |
Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this is very good! Nicely written, with smooth prose and wonderful characterization. I love the older Yugi you've created and his interaction with Yami. The scene where YY and Y meet the HP characters was very well done. The plot has caught my attention, the writing allows me to enjoy it without tons of grammar/spelling errors getting in the way, and since I'm a sucker for a good Y/YY romance, count me in for the long haul. ^_^ Looking forward to reading more... |
Reviewed By: Nicky On: July 05, 2003 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a good idea. You HAVE to continue this fic. It would be a waste to leave it hanging.
Great Fic! |
Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 14:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey--
i actually like this fic. so far. at first i was a little sketchy on the YGO/HP crossover thing (i don't really like crossovers....i think they take the structure that has been formed for each thing and rip them apart to conform. most of the time, it is poorly done and creates mayhem among characters.), but i think you've done a wonderful job merging their two worlds without taking anything away from them. oh, and i would love to see yaoi between yami and yugi (nani? no lemons? well, you can't have everything i suppose. but endless fluffiness is great too! ^__~)
keep up the great work and update soon!
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^ |
Reviewed By: C.M Aeris [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 20:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
I can't wait for the next chapter! |
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