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| "Vacation Blues" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] | | Pages (5): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 > » ] | Reviewed By: SadisticAngel_Noho [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Truly..truly wonderful.You've done well in writing it all.Its caught my interest and I was disappointed to find it over..but of course I only just found it and read the four chapters.So..understandable yet sadly I must wait..but I found when Yami fought the Death Eaters, entertaining!Its a dead give away with my name.But you did a great job and all I can say is that and keep up the great work.I'll be back to read again when you update.Ciao
| Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: April 10, 2004 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*scream bloody murder and begin cursing into Egyptian* Argh! I knew I hate bloody cliffhangers! Anyway, liking the part when u said u made Yami sound impotent, well I finally had the chance to watch more of the anime, but lately, the episodes have been scattered, confusing the hell out of me. Anyway, in Duelist Kingdom, Yami tried to kill Seto, but Yugi fought for control. And I missed a lot of the stuff during Battle City, but he seemed tame? I read somewhere that Yugi made Yami tame, so I guess that answers ur question. I havn't read the rest of the manga, I just bought the English translation of mange #4, and soo far, Yami only made Mokuba eat the poisoned hamburger. Brr... *shivers* And I thought Bakura was sadistic... Hm, pls write a fanfic, in which Yami, Bakura and Marik team up and wreak havoc on the bad guys! I'd pay to see that. No, wait- anyone got a pic or drawing of Marik in a bunny suit? I need some blackmail material, then I'll have Marik wrapped around my finger! Cuz sometimes he refuses to cooperate, even if Malik promises- Not going there! *shakes head*
| Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: April 10, 2004 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*scream bloody murder and begin cursing into Egyptian* Argh! I knew I hate bloody cliffhangers! Anyway, liking the part when u said u made Yami sound impotent, well I finally had the chance to watch more of the anime, but lately, the episodes have been scattered, confusing the hell out of me. Anyway, in Duelist Kingdom, Yami tried to kill Seto, but Yugi fought for control. And I missed a lot of the stuff during Battle City, but he seemed tame? I read somewhere that Yugi made Yami tame, so I guess that answers ur question. I havn't read the rest of the manga, I just bought the English translation of mange #4, and soo far, Yami only made Mokuba eat the poisoned hamburger. Brr... *shivers* And I thought Bakura was sadistic... Hm, pls write a fanfic, in which Yami, Bakura and Marik team up and wreak havoc on the bad guys! I'd pay to see that. No, wait- anyone got a pic or drawing of Marik in a bunny suit? I need some blackmail material, then I'll have Marik wrapped around my finger! Cuz sometimes he refuses to cooperate, even if Malik promises- Not going there! *shakes head*
| Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: April 10, 2004 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*scream bloody murder and begin cursing into Egyptian* Argh! I knew I hate bloody cliffhangers! Anyway, liking the part when u said u made Yami sound impotent, well I finally had the chance to watch more of the anime, but lately, the episodes have been scattered, confusing the hell out of me. Anyway, in Duelist Kingdom, Yami tried to kill Seto, but Yugi fought for control. And I missed a lot of the stuff during Battle City, but he seemed tame? I read somewhere that Yugi made Yami tame, so I guess that answers ur question. I havn't read the rest of the manga, I just bought the English translation of mange #4, and soo far, Yami only made Mokuba eat the poisoned hamburger. Brr... *shivers* And I thought Bakura was sadistic... Hm, pls write a fanfic, in which Yami, Bakura and Marik team up and wreak havoc on the bad guys! I'd pay to see that. No, wait- anyone got a pic or drawing of Marik in a bunny suit? I need some blackmail material, then I'll have Marik wrapped around my finger! Cuz sometimes he refuses to cooperate, even if Malik promises- Not going there! *shakes head*
| Reviewed By: /Anon/ On: March 31, 2004 05:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear God...that was bloody brilliant. Carry on writing please...
| Reviewed By: DMYamiyugi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 11:13 CST
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This story os so good. I really like it...a hole lot. I am so sorry about what's happend with your vision and sone, and understand if you might not be updating for a while. Keep up the good work though. Belive me, you have facinating talent in writting ^_~
| Title: EVIL PERSON!!!!
Reviewed By: Toki Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 14:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO!!!!!!! NO!!!!!!!!! YOU EVIL PERSON!!!!!!!! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!!!! DAMNIT DAMNIT DAMNIT DAMNIT DAMNIT DAMNIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOT ONLY DID IT TAKE U LONG ENOUGH FOR U TO UPDATE, YOU HAD TO END IT _RIGHT_THERE_ YOU EVIL PERSON!!!!!! EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE OR I SHALL PLACE A CURSE UPON YOU THAT YOU WILL REGRET FOR THE REST OF YOUR LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Title: GemJewel
Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 13:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so cool. does yami find yugi? u HAVE to continue this story!
| Title: GemJewel
Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 00:36 CST
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this is such a cool story! i love it. i really want to know what happens. plz plz continue with this story!!!!
| Reviewed By: Toki Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE ALREADY!!! THIS IS THE SECOND TIME IN LIKE, FOUR MONTHS I'VE READ THIS!!! i want to know what happens, is that so hard to ask??!!! *sniff*
| Reviewed By: C.M Aeris [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 21:10 CST
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I knew something was familiar about this story! IF YOU EVER REPOST YOUR STORIES IN FF.NET PLEASE PUT THIS BACK UP!!!! PLEASE!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: December 25, 2003 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dunno about the porno movies, since I only have the first 3 volumes of the translated manga... But I've read enough to know that Yami is a sadistic bastard... The part where he set the gang members on fire in volume 3 was enough to creep me out...Not to mention what Yami did to Joey's former gang! I noticed he mainly takes over when Yugi and his friends are hurt. The black fire is something new entirely! And I only saw about 2 episdoes of the anime, since I never have the time to watch it...I only saw the part when Duke made Joey wear the dog costume, and one other, when Mai and Malik dueled, but since Malik was using Shadow magic, I'm thinking it was Marik she dueled...Yugi seemed like a nice guy, but I never got to see how Yami fought, so I dunno if he's different from the manga...
| Reviewed By: Mood [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 11:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic...Shi-Koi you've done it again. I just re-discovered why I love cross-overs so much. Try and finish it if you can...finishing crossovers is hard, but try to. I want to know what you want to happen. You're writing is always good and you're pairings are good too. Keep going.
| Reviewed By: bebe On: September 10, 2003 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god! that is ssssssssoooooooooooo good!
you have to continue this! now! you read me! NOW! | Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 12:25 CDT
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hey---
excellent chapter. you're a very skilled write when it comes to action. the scenes were very well depicted.
that whole part about yami becoming flames and connecting with the shadows...wow...that was neat. i got chills as i read it. and all just because he was protecting yugi---awwww.
can't wait to see more.
keep up the great work and please update soon!
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^ | | Pages (5): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 > » ] |
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