| "Betrayal" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Title: Citrussy101
Reviewed By: Citrussy101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 09:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, you're killing me here, what happens!!! NEway, love the plot line, trualy saucy.
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Reviewed By: Citrussy101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy shit, love it but fuckin' write faster!!! (sarcasm intended)
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Title: A.K.A bishonenlover
Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yah! Your back! I loved this story and so wanted you to continue. Please if nothing else, don't make us wait another two months plus for a new chapter. I can stand to wait for long updates, but that is just ridiculous. Thankies!
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Reviewed By: R_Winner(not signed in) On: October 20, 2003 17:19 CDT
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You Wrote more! Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!! My poor Quatre though! It's sooooooooooo sad! That bastard Ryan better get what he diserves! keep it up...I want more soon are my previous threat will still be in effect!
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Title: Write more!
Reviewed By: Poetically Incorrect On: October 20, 2003 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Poor Q-man, everything bad happens to him! Curse that Ryan! Anyway I want T-kun to cheer him up, we all know T-kun loves his Q-man. Can't wait to read more and update when you can, we all understand.
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2003 17:20 CDT
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Write more! Lest mi foot find your ass and kick the crap out of it write more!
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Title: all chapters
Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: August 31, 2003 04:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
re-reads the last line and scream bloody murder* I hate cliffhangers! *Death Glare* Damn! Why didn't you have Trowa show up and kick Ryan's sorry ass?! I hate cheating, cuz it happened to my best friend. Her jerk ex cheated on her numberous times! It tore her up inside! And Ryan reminds me of him! Only he is a brunnette. And u're right I strongly doubt that Darien is anything like Ryan! Since in the manga's he's a nice guy... And he's very loyal to his girlfriend...Only time i saw him with any others was when he was brainwashed, which seems to happen too often... 3 times I know of, and he died-hm once, the silver millenium doesn't count! Anyway, what did Duo find? It cannot be good since he called Heero... Are Duo and Heero together? Anyway, pls have Trowa, Duo, Heero and Wufei team up and kick Ryan's sorry ass! I'm sure that Wufei would think of something, since this could be considered as injustice, since Quatre is one of his friends and he got hurt! And I really wanna know who has the name Shinigami, since I came up with it 2 yrs ago and used it without any problems 3 weeks ago! |
Reviewed By: Lura On: July 29, 2003 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!!!!!! Please write more soon:)
Death to Ryan!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: MeefMonster On: July 28, 2003 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
totaly kick ass!!! i hope Heero and Duo skin that dude alive! |
Reviewed By: CHM On: July 26, 2003 13:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story rules! Keep this one going!! |
Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 17:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ooooooo... what did duo find out?.... This is getting good, can't wait for your next update! happy writing! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 16:21 CDT
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I loved the little mattress sales sharks. You're right, they DO circle like sharks around a bleeding fish.
Duo is too funny, and his personality here works well against Quatre's self-pity. The little soul purging that Quat indulged in at dinner was well done. I like the subtle hint he inadvertently dropped.
Nice cliffhanger ending. I do wonder what was in that folder that Rashid gave Duo - that ALSO prompted Duo to immediately call Heero. Yes, the plot does indeed thicken here! |
Reviewed By: bishonenlover On: July 23, 2003 10:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I hate when people write story's and they have only one chapter up and wait a month or more to do the next one.This sound's like a really cute story please continue and soon I can't stand the suspense! |
Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 18:03 CDT
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Duo driving? this could be bad....... poor Quatre. But bitchy wow! That was different. I like it! Duo is such a pest. but I love him for it. if anyone can help Q-man its him. Happy writing! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Sundaire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 13:02 CDT
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I overlooked this story at first.. When I saw the summary I was afraid of it being Trowa cheating on Quatre, but I'm glad I took the chance and opened that first chapter.
I like how you made Quatre level-headed (so to speak) about the betrayal, instead of a crying, weak mess like he is so often characterized. The dream in the first chapter was a nice touch.
And Duo's hilarious, a stubborn best friend, just what Quatre needs... So when do we get to see Heero? (I love 1x2x1).
I can't wait to see Quatre's reaction when Trowa enters the picture (since he's obviously not over him), and how Trowa feels about it all...
Update soon! |
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