| "Tied" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Chibi Enu ^_^ On: October 15, 2003 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ ^_^ Hello, again.... I LOVED THIS CHAPPIE!!!! Please write more? *puppy eyes*
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Reviewed By: AolaniDathomir [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 22:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! Your story is really good! I don't see a whole lot of Aya/Omi, but I personally like the pairing. Omi is probably the only one who could really melt that icy Aya exterior. I really dislike Ken, but I think it's funny the way he and Youji interect in this story. Maybe Ken could get his lover to help him kill Youji while their's sleeping. Though that would be bad, because I love Youji! Please write more. |
Reviewed By: fanny On: July 27, 2003 18:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is cute.. i like it alot! i cant wait till the next chappy! how mant customers will yohji and ken be able to scare off? |
Reviewed By: Maelstrom of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the fic thus far, and am curious to find out how the rest of this ordeal will be dealt with. Congratulations for an original idea, they're hard to come by these days. Post the next chapter soon, please! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Sierra On: July 11, 2003 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story alot! it's really funny and very creative, and new. I hope to see the next chapter soon. |
Reviewed By: Chibi Enu ^_^ On: August 06, 2003 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*huggles* I love it!!!! Please write more???? . . . . PLEASE???? :'( ^^ |
