| "Kagome's Spirit Detective Cousin" Reviews/Comments [ 98 ] |
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Title: Beta reading
Reviewed By: Zhare On: October 12, 2003 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good fic, even if I have seen others like it. My opinion on couples is that when there is a Inu/YYH crossover Kagome should be put with Kurama. Also I would like to offer my services as a beta reader. If you don't know what a beta reader is; a beta is someone who reads over your story before you post it, and corrects spelling and grammer mistakes, and also gives advice conserning plot holes and ways to maybe make your fic better (such as pointing out if they think a certain scene should have gone a different way). Please e-mail me, as soon as you can, at dragon16@wcnet.org and tell me whether or not you want to accept my offer. If you do, please send me the next chapter of your story when it is finished and I will get to it as soon as I can. Zhare P.S. Please do not send it in an attachment as I have had problems with them in the past.
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Title: dranged fanfic lover
Reviewed By: debbie the rex On: October 11, 2003 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me liky.Inu/kag pleaqse
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Reviewed By: maibe On: October 11, 2003 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE! it wdas like, WOW! Sooo, dude, the story is great, but the organization sucks! It makes me confused! I love the story, but i was dizzy while i was reading this *I have flu right now* but it kick BIG BAD ASS! So, you'ar a kool writer, but your presentation ruins critiques. Dude, i just have to write it agai, you're way good. By the way, i agree with inu and K action, but make Inu green with Hiei. Or maybe 5 guys after kagome, -the deamon, Hiei, Kouga, Naraku, -and of course, Inu! But, keeping on mind K and Inu true and decerving romance.
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Reviewed By: maibe On: October 11, 2003 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE! it wdas like, WOW! Sooo, dude, the story is great, but the organization sucks! It makes me confused! I love the story, but i was dizzy while i was reading this *I have flu right now* but it kick BIG BAD ASS! So, you'ar a kool writer, but your presentation ruins critiques. Dude, i just have to write it agai, you're way good.
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Reviewed By: Tiger_Blaze On: October 11, 2003 02:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi there! I'm really enjoying this fic. I just wanted to drop you a line to tell you that. I also wanted to let you know that it looks like your fic is leaning towards a Hiei/Kagome pairing rather than an Inuyasha/Kagome pairing. Maybe it'll turn into a Hiei/Kagome/Inuyasha love triangle? G2g TTFN ^_^
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Title: Yeah you updated!!
Reviewed By: SaiyanPrincessSesshysgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2003 01:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can it be a Hiei/Kagome? I'm always reading I/K, I need something new, PLEASE!?!?!?!?!? YOU ROCK!!!!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
[heie/kagome] i was a good chap. please update soon thanks
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Reviewed By: blah_girl_bored2death On: October 10, 2003 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
you might want to work on where you put the little things that mean someone's talking. It's really confusing the way that you have it now. Jsut a little thought for the moment. And you might want to work on your spelling as well. You spelled Yusuke's name wrong. It has another "u" after the "s". Jsut thought I'd let you know. But other than that, it's pretyy good.
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Reviewed By: FiReAzUnA On: October 10, 2003 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
um you need quotations and yuske is spelled yusuke there are many other errors,but who am i to judge lol.
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! wow! i LOVE this story so far! well, umm for hte pairing, id put inuyasha and kagome, but make her like hiei for a while is my suggestion....well, thanx for making such a good story, and plz update soon! Ai-Lani
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Reviewed By: Inu_kagome_nut [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic so far hurry up and update lol I vote Kag/Inu Heie is cool and all but way to short lol keep up the good work ^_^
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Reviewed By: Akki Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon and I hope it is hiei/kagome please!!!!
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Reviewed By: Blue cresent moon On: October 06, 2003 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEN IS YOUR COMPUTER GOING TO WORK I LOVR THIS FIC WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA please update sooooon. *_*
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Reviewed By: Rosie BB On: October 05, 2003 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This sounds really intersting!! I REALLY want you to continue!! It sound s sooooooo cool!! p.s. yes, you really need to put in quotations.
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Reviewed By: youki kagome On: September 29, 2003 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your storie can you email me when you up date thhank's to email me go to Youkikagome@aol.com thank you
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