| "Number 12" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ravensilver On: October 02, 2003 06:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue. I am enjoying this story very much. Ravensilver
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Reviewed By: Shadowed Light On: September 28, 2003 10:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooOoooOOoooOoo! I really really really REALLY like your fic! Keep going! ^_^
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Reviewed By: turtlefire [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good work!! This is a very well written fanfic! I love the way you protray the G boys' characters. The Duo torture is realistic and delicious! Please write more!!!!!
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Reviewed By: turtlefire [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good work!! This is a very well written fanfic! I love the way you protray the G boys' characters. The Duo torture is realistic and delicious! Please write more!!!!!
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Reviewed By: turtlefire [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good work!! This is a very well written fanfic! I love the way you protray the G boys' characters. The Duo torture is realistic and delicious! Please write more!!!!!
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Reviewed By: turtlefire [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good work!! This is a very well written fanfic! I love the way you protray the G boys' characters. The Duo torture is realistic and delicious! Please write more!!!!!
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Reviewed By: turtlefire [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good work!! This is a very well written fanfic! I love the way you protray the G boys' characters. The Duo torture is realistic and delicious! Please write more!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 07:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Certainly an interesting way to begin a chapter. I had to laugh at your comment about Duo getting stuck in drag, although the perks afterwards seem worth it
I have to say, I laughed at the entire intro to your story. (And I actually found a subbed version of Gravitation, so I know what you mean!)
Nice cliffhanger ending. The build up with the dream fading away to the lack of electricity flowed nicely, in my opinion. |
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