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Reviewed By: Mika Kitty 666 On: November 01, 2004 11:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You must really enjoy making short chapters. Hmmmm…. Your Grammar could use a little work and you should read your fic over for mistakes. I think it's kind of funny how Joey's trying to convince himself that he's a luster of girls not boys (c'mon what's wrong with being gay?). You defiantly have an interesting with conjuring sentences. You're defiantly quick with sexy sex scenes. But hey I'm like that too (I don't have the Internet just yet so you can't read any of my fics yet). Suggestion: try to imagine the scene in your head and then write it you as interestingly and as lengthy as you can. In Chapter ten you kind of made a funny mistake; in stead of 'he slid one finger into Marik,' you typed 'he slid one hand into Marik'. Hee hee, I don't think Ryou would have the guts to fist Marik, or anyone for that matter. *Sniffs* that was beautiful. Just remember what I suggested… P.S. Please don't think of this review as a flame cause I never write flames.
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Reviewed By: Maliksgirl1125 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 12:03 CST
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Okay, as seeing that no one is reveiwing to my last comment, I take it that you all have gotten the point and you realize that I have won and you have lost. I am calm now so I think I shall take my leave. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Jolt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 17:05 CST
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This fic kicked butt!!!
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Reviewed By: me On: December 03, 2003 16:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*crying* OMG that was a GREAT story, it was so, so brilliant, the plot was great. Poor Joey.
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Reviewed By: Malikgirl1125 On: November 29, 2003 02:49 CST
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MY GOD! YOU STUPID ASS PEOPLE! DON'T YOU GET IT! I ONLY COME BACK TO TELL OFF PEOPLE LIKE YOU BECAUSE YOU'RE NOT SMART ENOUGH TO GET IT! I WAS JUST MAKING AN ASS OF MYSELF BECAUSE PEOPLE LIKE YOU RESPOND! YOU WIG OUT WORSE THAN I DO! MY GOD! WHAT DO YOU WANT ME TO SAY! I'LL JUST TELL YOU THIS. I READ THE FIC.I LIKED THE FIC. I HATED THE PLOT. OKAY! NOW GET IT THROUGH YOUR THICK SKULLS THAT I ONLY PISS YOU OFF BECAUSE YOU GET PISSED OFF!
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Reviewed By: Jolt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 15:46 CST
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this story was really good, the ending made me cry, please continue on your other fics...
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: HotsummerYami [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow i really like this fanfic! update soon!^_^
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Reviewed By: brittany On: October 18, 2003 18:43 CDT
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I really like you fic! Please contiue writing your story and don't worry about what that he/she mutant Marik's girl says. He/she just a retard that like to read fics that he/she hates! Strange isn't it? I think Marik girl should get a life and stop making threats to people. YEAH IF YOU READING THIS BITCH, FUCK YOU!!! I hope you at least send your stupid threats to my e-mail then being a bitch and hogging up the review!!! NO ONE LIKES YOU!!! GO AWAY!!! *Breaths deeply before smiling sheepishly at LusciousDragon* Sorry about that, I jus had to say something to that mutant bitch. Anyway I really like you fic,so please continue updating.
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Reviewed By: shadow hawk On: October 07, 2003 20:02 CDT
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fuck you, Malik's Girl1125. take your cheese sandwich and shove it up your ass. if you don't like the fic's then dont read, so spare us your lame, pitiful reviews. you are distgusting and everybody hates you. screw off, you dumb bitch, and go fuck yourself, because nobody with a brain would do you anyways.eat shit and get hit by a car.
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Reviewed By: Malik's Girl1125 On: September 15, 2003 01:19 CDT
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Yes, I'm Malik's Girl no joke. I have to add the 1125 too reveiw since someone already is Malik's Girl(no surprise there). Yo, Shadow Hawk, got a coupla things to tell ya.
1 Did you read my last reveiw or not! I don't hate lusciousdragon, just her fic!
2 I've heard better comebacks from a cheese sandwhich. |
Reviewed By: Shadow Hawk On: September 14, 2003 00:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! your storey is awesome, i loved every minute of it! it was really breath taking and absolutly wonderful to read! 10 just dosent cover your storeis worth. and as for "malik girl" i think you should fuck off. nobody likes you anyways, you stupid ugly retarded bitch!!!! your a fat whore that should grow up and get a life!!! i'd watch my back if i were you, espcially when your alone at night with nobody around. |
Reviewed By: Malik's Girl On: August 23, 2003 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For all of you shitheads(take offence) I only hate LusciousDragon and ShadowDragon for making this Fic. Read Joey's Big Brother and look in the reveiw section too see what I mean. Oh and No I'm NOT a mutant creature. My Yami is a spirit and I'm a DEMON. an evil one. Mattering what the story is about matters if I kill you quickly and painlessley, or slow and greusome. |
Reviewed By: Li's Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh! I am so sorry that Malik's Girl reviewed your story so terribly like that. It's just horrible. I hope it doesn't affect you too much, and I pray the harrassment stops soon for everyones sake. |
Reviewed By: kazuki On: July 30, 2003 03:06 CDT
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ouiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!
I hate death fic TT_TT
but it's beautiful...
give me a gun and I will kill that fucking dog of jounouchi. No one kill my ryuou-chan. grrrrrr
lusciousdragon, I hope you will continue to write many other fic on malik/ryou
and for malik's girl I'm really pity her... I feel sorry for her to be so intolerant, and to be a pain in a ass. |
Reviewed By: LusciousDragon and Shadowdragon On: July 29, 2003 17:51 CDT
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OK, I've never reviewed my stories, but I figured this is the only way to get you to read what I have to say, PLEASE STOP REVIEWING MY STORIES and PICKING FIGHTS WITH THE PEOPLE WHO ACTUALLY LIKED MY STORY!!!! I wouldn't have minded if you had apoligized, I would've excepted it, but NOW I won't... I would like to ask you nicely, before I get angry, (yes, hikari's can get angry,) PLEASE STOP REVIEWING MY STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really hate having to remove your messages.
ShadowDragon: Why don't I say it so that she'll understand... GET YOUR FAT ASS OF THIS REVIEWING PAGE BEFORE I COME AND KICK IT!!!!!!!! AND IF YOUR NOT HUMAN THAN WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU...SOME KIND OF MUTANT CREATURE??? OR IS THAT JUST WHAT YOU TELL YOUR PYCHOLOGIST!!!!!!!!!! IT'S REALLY SAD, ACTUALLY, YOU SHOULD BE PITIED, A LIL' GIRL, PRETENDIN' SHE'S not human... NO WAIT IT'S pathetic... SO get you and your sad excuse for a yami off this page, 'cause I wield a power you can only dream of, the power to get RID OF YOUR MESSAGES!!!!!!!!! |
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