| "Unfaithful" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: Laina On: July 23, 2003 06:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I jusy finished the last chapter and it was great. Please update soon!!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: autumn On: July 23, 2003 06:03 PDT
Comment/Review:
This is a great story! I like how you have portrayed Vegeta's character, he is so good at being standoffish even when he really does have feelings. Also, Bulma's meek attitude is thoroughly explained with the flashbacks and comments woven seamlessly into the story. Those details make her demeanor realistic. Great so far!! |
Reviewed By: Sokai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 22:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is so good i have be following it on fanfiction.net but the site is down any way good job on this story but please kill yam head soon....
the fallen one |
Reviewed By: Laina On: July 18, 2003 01:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon!!!!!!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: SaiyanGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 18:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic and I just wanted to reinforce my love for this fic... though i can only hope that you kill off yamcha soon... very soon. Besides that, I am so happy that you have given Bulma the guts to express her love for Vegeta. Those two where ment for each other.
Love'n Hugs
SGBX |
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