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Title: Chapter 28
Reviewed By: Lady Valtaya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 20:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I can't remember the last time I was moved by a DBZ Fan fic enough to read this many chapters and all in the same day no less... But I am truly glad I did. I hope Vegeta doesn't snap totally and become (figuratively) his father, but I really feel more for his mom and for Bulma than for him right now. Poor Bulma, I don't think any woman should ever have to deal with the things she is up against... between her mother and Yamcha, I would have killed myself by now, and I'm sure it'll get worse before it gets better for the poor girl. Keep going I can't wait to see how this turns out.
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Reviewed By: tam-tam On: October 24, 2003 14:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is bad ass! you need to update soon!
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Reviewed By: hetchi1 On: October 15, 2003 12:09 PDT
Comment/Review:
Please oh please update your fic, I must know what is going to happen. I do hope you kill off Bulma's mom. And castrate Yamcha. heheheheheh.
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2003 17:51 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Those new chapters were great. Ahh, I really loved 'em. Man, I really hope that they end up together in the end, I would cry if they didn't. The premonitions and evidence in the story point otherwise, though. Grr, Oh well, I still hope that. Anyways, please hurry withthe next chapters, they're great! |
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2003 18:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thos new chapters were really great, very angsty. I can't wait to see what happens!!
(Oh, but, no offense or anything, but ifbulma dies and they don't get to be together in the end, I'm gunna be pissed and sad, so..you know); )~ |
Reviewed By: chiara [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2003 11:04 PDT
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Well I know how little these readers review.I have the same problem but I also still put my fic`s here. So just wanted to say that your writhing a great fic! |
Reviewed By: red dragon On: September 10, 2003 01:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting fic thus far, as a a/u type in particular.still lots of material to be covered for future chapters though....so don't think of stopping at all |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 23:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, these last two chapters were especially heart-wrenching!! I think evanescence's- 'Bring me to life'- suits this fic to a tea, especially ch.22! I can't wait to read the climax to this! Please Update! |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 22:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this so much! I really love how you portray Bulma in this! It's a beautiful story. (And, you have Radditz, Turles,*xxxooo!!* and Bardock in it too!!) |
Reviewed By: RainAiyre13/Dream Wisher On: August 02, 2003 15:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All 10's for this fic! I luv this! Keep writing because it's so original and well written! I LUV THIS FIC! |
Reviewed By: Bry On: July 31, 2003 04:14 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I've been reading this fanfiction over on FFDN and i have to say its one of my favouritist fics out there. I can't pinpoint exact bits but, like in chapter 17 when Vegita had to watch Bulma being raped, it induced lots of emotions in me.
So, anyway, i gave those marks bcuz its such a good fic!! I just hope to see more to this story than others that sometimes follow this - vegita gets pissed, yambam dies, no war blah blah blah, i actually really really really reallywant to have this war. It'll make everything so interesting.
Anyway, great fic and looking forward to more, and knowing that if either of the sites break down i can just go to the opposite one to find this fic!! ^.^
Bry |
Reviewed By: lil rach On: July 29, 2003 01:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story soo much! i like how you decribe everything in the story too. omg i feel so bad for bulma :( keep updating i love it!! lol |
Reviewed By: Yari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 15:31 PDT
Comment/Review:
Great Story! I can't wait for Vegeta to kick Yamcha's ass... or even better, for Bulma to somehow kick his ass! Anyway, Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Jess On: July 23, 2003 14:29 PDT
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gOOD STUff can't wait for the next chappie |
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 13:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't understand why you haven't gotten more reveiws for this story. It's so original and in-depth. I know I love it. Please keep going!!! |
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