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Reviewed By: lois On: October 14, 2007 14:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
what happened with the text? it's horrible for the eyes.
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Reviewed By: loise On: October 11, 2007 15:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
just 33 reviews? i cannot believe it. i love your fanfiction.
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Reviewed By: Trunks_Wifie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 20:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all let me start by saying Cerulean Rhapsody congratulate yourself because you have done something very few could. You caught my attention. I usually read fics that have the rating of X but I thought to myself that I'd venture out of the ordinary and read a lower rating fic and behold I came upon yours. I love the detail you put into every scenario and how well you expressed the emotion of the characters. I thought Vegeta could have softened up a bit but then again who am I kidding right. Over all I LOVED this story and I look forward to seeing more of your work. Welcome to my favorite authors list.
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 12:33 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just finished this today, brilliant story, so glad you finished writing it, going to read your new one now, cant wait..keep up the good work
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Title: Understand
Reviewed By: Bakani Banana [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 15:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*smiles thinly* You...have managed to do something that no story has since I read teh Damiano trilogy by R.A.McAvoy years ago. I cried from almost the first chapter through the last in an unwilling sympathy for Bulma if for no other reason that I know first hand what she is going through and am only now being blessed with the means to escape it. *hugs tightly with a soft sound* Everyone writes of things like this and they speak of fear and hidden courage but they seldom touch on how those who look on from without will often comment on hollowed eyes and smiles that are never more than a stretching of one's lips. To ask the same question over and over again that you can never find a way to answer... "are you alright?"
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Title: I have always liked this story, but...
Reviewed By: Lady Valtaya [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 22:41 PDT
Comment/Review:
there is one thing about this fic that REALLY bugs me. Please don't take this the wrong way, but Bulma's mother doesn't have a mean bone in her entire body. You could have left her as the sweet, brainless character from the show and still have Bulma get stuck being married to Yamcha. Anyway, nice job on this fic, I've always liked reading it.
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Title: Great Job!
Reviewed By: EvilBunnySlippers [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 13:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fanfics, or stories in general, that I have ever read. The character developments and the overall plot is amazing and the whole story ties together into this great action/adventure/romance that just leaves you on the edge of your seat. You are very talanted and have done a GREAT job with this story! Keep up the writing!! -EBS
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Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 07:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there! Just thought I'd let you know that I drew a picture of Bulma that goes along with your fic! I'll add the link in so you don't have to look for me all over the site. lol. Hope you like it! http://www.mediaminer.org/fanart/view.php/168395 I loved your fanfic! Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit On: August 14, 2004 20:02 PDT
Comment/Review:
i would love to know the end of this story which by far is original compared to the other B/V stories... please finish this story.. i bet i and others would like to know the end to it....
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Reviewed By: kita [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 02:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story, but wish it was completed. Want to see if Vegeta gets the girl or not. Keep at it.
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Reviewed By: kazemaru On: August 02, 2004 02:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I am kinda bummed. I mean the story is great but the status says its completed and it isnt. It would be nice to see what happens.
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Reviewed By: RBV On: February 26, 2004 15:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story, but as I'm writing this it has already been over 3 months after the last update. Please do it soon. I cant wait to find out what happens
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Reviewed By: Dark_bulma69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 19:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good!!! PLEASE write more soon!! I'll be waiting for your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 11:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful as usual. Please hurry with the next. Though, I won't rush you, because such perfect writing takes time to turn out.
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Title: Chapter 30
Reviewed By: ladyvaltaya On: October 29, 2003 20:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Bulma... I sure hope they get to her soon because at this rate there won't be much left of the poor thing. Her mother isn't even a mother she's more like some sick twisted succubus that is jealous of her own child's ability to seduce the most interesting men... (Which unfortunately for Bulma isn't even what happened but it seems her mother doesn't care what happened). I don't know how any person could ever take pleasure in another person's misery that way- and to threaten her life like that too- it's almost too much for my little heart to handle... But I can't wait to see the next chapter. ^_^
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