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Reviewed By: chiara [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2003 11:04 PDT
Comment/Review:
Well I know how little these readers review.I have the same problem but I also still put my fic`s here. So just wanted to say that your writhing a great fic! |
Reviewed By: red dragon On: September 10, 2003 01:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting fic thus far, as a a/u type in particular.still lots of material to be covered for future chapters though....so don't think of stopping at all |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 23:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, these last two chapters were especially heart-wrenching!! I think evanescence's- 'Bring me to life'- suits this fic to a tea, especially ch.22! I can't wait to read the climax to this! Please Update! |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 22:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this so much! I really love how you portray Bulma in this! It's a beautiful story. (And, you have Radditz, Turles,*xxxooo!!* and Bardock in it too!!) |
Reviewed By: RainAiyre13/Dream Wisher On: August 02, 2003 15:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All 10's for this fic! I luv this! Keep writing because it's so original and well written! I LUV THIS FIC! |
Reviewed By: Bry On: July 31, 2003 04:14 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I've been reading this fanfiction over on FFDN and i have to say its one of my favouritist fics out there. I can't pinpoint exact bits but, like in chapter 17 when Vegita had to watch Bulma being raped, it induced lots of emotions in me.
So, anyway, i gave those marks bcuz its such a good fic!! I just hope to see more to this story than others that sometimes follow this - vegita gets pissed, yambam dies, no war blah blah blah, i actually really really really reallywant to have this war. It'll make everything so interesting.
Anyway, great fic and looking forward to more, and knowing that if either of the sites break down i can just go to the opposite one to find this fic!! ^.^
Bry |
Reviewed By: lil rach On: July 29, 2003 01:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story soo much! i like how you decribe everything in the story too. omg i feel so bad for bulma :( keep updating i love it!! lol |
Reviewed By: Yari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 15:31 PDT
Comment/Review:
Great Story! I can't wait for Vegeta to kick Yamcha's ass... or even better, for Bulma to somehow kick his ass! Anyway, Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Jess On: July 23, 2003 14:29 PDT
Comment/Review:
gOOD STUff can't wait for the next chappie |
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 13:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't understand why you haven't gotten more reveiws for this story. It's so original and in-depth. I know I love it. Please keep going!!! |
Reviewed By: Laina On: July 23, 2003 06:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I jusy finished the last chapter and it was great. Please update soon!!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: autumn On: July 23, 2003 06:03 PDT
Comment/Review:
This is a great story! I like how you have portrayed Vegeta's character, he is so good at being standoffish even when he really does have feelings. Also, Bulma's meek attitude is thoroughly explained with the flashbacks and comments woven seamlessly into the story. Those details make her demeanor realistic. Great so far!! |
Reviewed By: Sokai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 22:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is so good i have be following it on fanfiction.net but the site is down any way good job on this story but please kill yam head soon....
the fallen one |
Reviewed By: Laina On: July 18, 2003 01:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon!!!!!!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: SaiyanGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 18:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic and I just wanted to reinforce my love for this fic... though i can only hope that you kill off yamcha soon... very soon. Besides that, I am so happy that you have given Bulma the guts to express her love for Vegeta. Those two where ment for each other.
Love'n Hugs
SGBX |
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