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Title: I have always liked this story, but...
Reviewed By: Lady Valtaya [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 22:41 PDT
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there is one thing about this fic that REALLY bugs me. Please don't take this the wrong way, but Bulma's mother doesn't have a mean bone in her entire body. You could have left her as the sweet, brainless character from the show and still have Bulma get stuck being married to Yamcha. Anyway, nice job on this fic, I've always liked reading it.
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Title: Great Job!
Reviewed By: EvilBunnySlippers [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 13:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fanfics, or stories in general, that I have ever read. The character developments and the overall plot is amazing and the whole story ties together into this great action/adventure/romance that just leaves you on the edge of your seat. You are very talanted and have done a GREAT job with this story! Keep up the writing!! -EBS
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Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 07:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there! Just thought I'd let you know that I drew a picture of Bulma that goes along with your fic! I'll add the link in so you don't have to look for me all over the site. lol. Hope you like it! http://www.mediaminer.org/fanart/view.php/168395 I loved your fanfic! Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit On: August 14, 2004 20:02 PDT
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i would love to know the end of this story which by far is original compared to the other B/V stories... please finish this story.. i bet i and others would like to know the end to it....
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Reviewed By: kita [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 02:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story, but wish it was completed. Want to see if Vegeta gets the girl or not. Keep at it.
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Reviewed By: kazemaru On: August 02, 2004 02:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I am kinda bummed. I mean the story is great but the status says its completed and it isnt. It would be nice to see what happens.
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Reviewed By: RBV On: February 26, 2004 15:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story, but as I'm writing this it has already been over 3 months after the last update. Please do it soon. I cant wait to find out what happens
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Reviewed By: Dark_bulma69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 19:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good!!! PLEASE write more soon!! I'll be waiting for your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 11:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful as usual. Please hurry with the next. Though, I won't rush you, because such perfect writing takes time to turn out.
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Title: Chapter 30
Reviewed By: ladyvaltaya On: October 29, 2003 20:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Bulma... I sure hope they get to her soon because at this rate there won't be much left of the poor thing. Her mother isn't even a mother she's more like some sick twisted succubus that is jealous of her own child's ability to seduce the most interesting men... (Which unfortunately for Bulma isn't even what happened but it seems her mother doesn't care what happened). I don't know how any person could ever take pleasure in another person's misery that way- and to threaten her life like that too- it's almost too much for my little heart to handle... But I can't wait to see the next chapter. ^_^
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Title: Chapter 28
Reviewed By: Lady Valtaya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 20:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I can't remember the last time I was moved by a DBZ Fan fic enough to read this many chapters and all in the same day no less... But I am truly glad I did. I hope Vegeta doesn't snap totally and become (figuratively) his father, but I really feel more for his mom and for Bulma than for him right now. Poor Bulma, I don't think any woman should ever have to deal with the things she is up against... between her mother and Yamcha, I would have killed myself by now, and I'm sure it'll get worse before it gets better for the poor girl. Keep going I can't wait to see how this turns out.
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Reviewed By: tam-tam On: October 24, 2003 14:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is bad ass! you need to update soon!
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Reviewed By: hetchi1 On: October 15, 2003 12:09 PDT
Comment/Review:
Please oh please update your fic, I must know what is going to happen. I do hope you kill off Bulma's mom. And castrate Yamcha. heheheheheh.
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2003 17:51 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Those new chapters were great. Ahh, I really loved 'em. Man, I really hope that they end up together in the end, I would cry if they didn't. The premonitions and evidence in the story point otherwise, though. Grr, Oh well, I still hope that. Anyways, please hurry withthe next chapters, they're great! |
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2003 18:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thos new chapters were really great, very angsty. I can't wait to see what happens!!
(Oh, but, no offense or anything, but ifbulma dies and they don't get to be together in the end, I'm gunna be pissed and sad, so..you know); )~ |
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