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| "Unfaithful" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] | | Pages (4): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 › » ] | Title: ch32
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 13:34 PST
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The unjust cruelty which the saiyans are employing in their handling of the civilians makes me doubt post-war peace between earth and Vegetesei. It seems their will be a heavy sacrifice before this war is over, i'm not sure who it will be, Vegeta's death, Bulma's, Kakkarrot's, Chi chi's? or maybe Magdelene? I wish none of them had to die, but it seems as if the fates won't be so kind in this war. Also, I don't trust Valyn, although he is giving the saiyans aid with technology, his lack of commitment to the truce, leads me to question his intentions. And was that spiritual communication that occurred for a brief moment between Vegeta and Bulma, is it to do with their bond, there was mention of Valyn's scryer breaking, does he have spiritual power of some kind? I hope that Vegeta's breaking of the glass scryer and subsequent breaking of the connection does not presage anything for the future. One other thing the text for this chapter on mediaminer is frustrating to read for some reason, clumped together, I read it on fanfiction.net instead.
| Title: ch27
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 11:29 PST
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Vegeta is..oh my gosh, I, man I don't even know what to say, I hope that he won't turn out like his father, his control is practically non existant, there is perhaps only a slither of an ammount left, due to his love for Bulma which reigns him in, yet his feelings, emotions for Bulma are also the very things which are causing him to be irrational manic, more dangerous. I can't believe he would suggest contaminating the earth water with poison. I hope Queen Magdelene can find answers.
| Title: ch26
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 10:18 PST
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It seems Yamucha has finally succeeded in breaking Bulma, I can't believe that he is going to make the children fight in the war. I dread to see what will happen when this Iliadic battle really begins.
| Title: Ch22
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 05:43 PST
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I still can't believe the saiyans let the ship get away, it seems a bit implausible, and I don't see why Turles was assigned to watch Bulma leave, if Kakarrot couldn't do anything, then I'm not sure what he could do. I wonder, if Yamucha can mange to escape from Vegetasei so easily, then what hope do they have when they attack earth? I think I am so eager for Yamucha to get destroyed that I can't wait; I'm sure it will come I just have to be patient I want Bulma to slit Yamcha's throat, I can't believe this story is inspiring this out of me, lol.
| Title: ch21
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 05:07 PST
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I can't believe how far things have spiralled out of control, what was Vegeta thinking, I know war couldn't be helped, but I feel he made it worse for her without insuring that she would be safe. And also, you have shown in your story that both Kakarrot and Vegeta have the instant transmission technique, it seems a bit odd that they didn't use it then, when they needed it more than ever. I'm really enjoying this story though, it just grips me from the first chapter, i'm addicted. And I love the song My Immortal and think it is definitely perfect for this fic.
| Title: ch19
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 04:37 PST
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foreboding sense of doom right about now, i fear it won't end well at all, i'm trying to think of the possible endings and none of them sound happy, when Bulma fantasises about how her life might be on Vegetesei, it seems like it's just that, a fantasy, that it won't be reality. And I can't believe Vegeta killed Nathalia, already innocent blood has been shed, and I wonder what else about Bulma's premonition will come true.
| Title: ch17
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 03:44 PST
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That was such a sad chapter I can't believe Yamcha and the pain he is inflicting on Bulma, I almost braced myself as I felt that Vegeta might risk discovery and do something or that Bulma would finally decide that enough was enough. And then that final scene where Vegeta comforted her so beautiful, so poignant.
| Title: ch15
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 02:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope Nathalia can be trusted, I don't know why i am worrying, she is loyal to bulma not just as a servant but a friend too; I just hope she won't be put in a situation which she might not be able to handle. Although it seems like Bulma and Vegeta's secret meeting are very dangerous,even moreso with the alibi of meeting to discuss politics, i think that makes it worse...but the pleasure calm and bliss that Bulma experiences in Vegeta's presence, might make it worth it, I say might because I wonder how much she will have to sacrifice; especially if that painting of the whiterobbed woman with the dagger surrounded by bloodshed is anything to go by.
| Title: CH7
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 18:28 PST
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Wow I am so impressed with the character of Queen Vegeta, she is an amzing woman. I wonder if her relationship with King Vegeta and his much deserved death will forcast Yamcha's end. I thought the love song between Bulma and Vegeta was beautiful, the saiyan mating ritual reminded me of the cry of songbirds. Man, i really want Bulma to regain the courage to let her fire blaze strongly as it once did. It flickers, but I fear yamcha may extinguish the flame completely, hopefully the red dessert and chaotic oceans of Vegetesei, along with its wild spirit will arouse her.
| Title: ch 2
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 17:13 PST
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This is a remarkable story, you really capture Bulma's anguish, I hope she finds the escape she needs on Vegetesei, and I really want Yamucha to get what's coming to him.
| Reviewed By: lois On: October 14, 2007 14:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
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what happened with the text? it's horrible for the eyes.
| Reviewed By: loise On: October 11, 2007 15:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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just 33 reviews? i cannot believe it. i love your fanfiction.
| Reviewed By: Trunks_Wifie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 20:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all let me start by saying Cerulean Rhapsody congratulate yourself because you have done something very few could. You caught my attention. I usually read fics that have the rating of X but I thought to myself that I'd venture out of the ordinary and read a lower rating fic and behold I came upon yours. I love the detail you put into every scenario and how well you expressed the emotion of the characters. I thought Vegeta could have softened up a bit but then again who am I kidding right. Over all I LOVED this story and I look forward to seeing more of your work. Welcome to my favorite authors list.
| Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 12:33 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just finished this today, brilliant story, so glad you finished writing it, going to read your new one now, cant wait..keep up the good work
| Title: Understand
Reviewed By: Bakani Banana [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 15:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*smiles thinly* You...have managed to do something that no story has since I read teh Damiano trilogy by R.A.McAvoy years ago. I cried from almost the first chapter through the last in an unwilling sympathy for Bulma if for no other reason that I know first hand what she is going through and am only now being blessed with the means to escape it. *hugs tightly with a soft sound* Everyone writes of things like this and they speak of fear and hidden courage but they seldom touch on how those who look on from without will often comment on hollowed eyes and smiles that are never more than a stretching of one's lips. To ask the same question over and over again that you can never find a way to answer... "are you alright?"
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