| "The Girl and the Band" Reviews/Comments [ 454 ] |
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Reviewed By: .:.LizziE.:. On: July 24, 2003 17:28 EDT
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i luv this fic and i luv how long each of ur chapters are, u truly are a great author.
update soon! |
Reviewed By: MikoKagome On: July 24, 2003 16:47 EDT
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hurry hurry hurrry hurry |
Reviewed By: Shirubi On: July 24, 2003 16:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got three words for ya: I. Love. It. Simple, It's a nice fanfic with the original pairings. (Inuyasha/Kagome, Sango/Miroku) Good grammer, mostly keeping to the charaters' atitudes. (Damn.. I sound like a fucking lang. arts teacher... Not good) *Sighs* It sucks that none of us could own Inuyasha though.. *off topic* heh.. Oh well, I look forward to the next chapters!
Bye for now.
._-°Shirubi°-_. |
Reviewed By: bise b On: July 24, 2003 16:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS SUCH AN AWSOME CHAPTER!!!!! I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! i hope you never stop writing! i dont think ive ever read a fic that was this good. and i so cannot wait to see what the girls have instore for the boys on their next challenge. haha i am so loving this. please have the next chapter up ASAP!!! THANX!! bye |
Reviewed By: Kain-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 14:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I think you did a brilliant job with this story. You know, I have to say that your writing style is excellent, because you explain things enough to make it believable. Well, meeting a rock/pop star isn't likley to happen, you know what I mean. Well, please keep updating. |
Reviewed By: Rei-chan On: July 24, 2003 01:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love review more. I love this fic! |
Reviewed By: Lirael [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 00:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fanfiction! I hope you continue writing! I thought it was pretty funny and it actually had me laughing out loud (mush to my embarrassment, in front of my parents) Oh well, I hope you have fun writing this story and it sounds very interesting. Are you going to have all the chapters end or begin with a challenge? Depending on how long you want to make the story and how long you want to spend writing it, I suggest that you determine how many you are going to do...such as ten or five or even eught. Then I would desperse them in between other events. I really like the story and I think it is very original! Good job!
I can't wait to read more!
:) |
Reviewed By: Kirisame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 19:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what ?? How come i already finished this chapter? it seemed quite long !!
Ooooooow, i'm dying here, waiting !!!
You're so damn good, every chapter is better than the one before...
simply breathtaking !
everything is great !
No kikyou to worry about, no stupid ku ku ku-ing Naraku ...
Just two lovebirds ! That's great !
Let them feel friendship,
Let them feel hope,
Let them feel love !!!!
*Let them kiss ^^ *
Are you going to make some Mir/Sang? (I love them too^^)
Go on with the great job.
Yay , I can't believe it! a whole month of lovely awkardness ^^ I'm just too fond of it for my own good... Well I do love some hot fantasy too , I must admitt.
But I think you've got the good balance !
steppin' a little bit, only a little bit more toward the NC-17 'd be great I think.
*sweaty sweet dreams ^^*
Kirisame. |
Reviewed By: HanyouFox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 14:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thinki saw a little spark or luv at the end of chapter 8lolz hey keep up the good work i love reading this story
u got me cumin back 4 more |
Reviewed By: LightMagican2 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 09:32 EDT
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update update |
Reviewed By: anubaka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 04:16 EDT
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i luv this fic update really soon!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Lady of the Western Lands On: July 22, 2003 23:43 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love this story it's very good. I think the guys should win, even though I know girls are better. It would be nice if they win because I would like Kagome to stay there, or the girls win and Kagome becomes part of the band. |
Reviewed By: Dustyfey [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 21:49 EDT
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yay! new chapter. what fun. anyway it was terrific. write more soon please. |
Reviewed By: Rei-Rei On: July 22, 2003 14:17 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that chapter was great! XD update soon!! ^_^ and i think u should make tha number of challenges an even number so if each group gets tha same points at first then there would have to b like a "bonus challenge" to break tha tie. just a suggestion. keep writing! =D |
Reviewed By: goukanomegami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 13:51 EDT
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^_^ Mosh pits are fun! Last concert I went to, I got knocked out by a crowdsurfer. it was cool though, casue when i came to, I got a free bottle of water! LOL. I don't know why I continue to beat the hell out of myself constantly. *shrug* Concert life :) |
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