| "Latex Blues" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Reviewed By: Trouble_In_Shangri_La [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 22:27 EDT
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This story was as hot as it was funny. Now a really funny after-thought to this would be Sesshoumaru or Kouga finding the broken condoms Inuyasha left on the ground XD Great fic!
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Title: awsome story!!
Reviewed By: kaye_kay28 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 15:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww!! i loved it! it was great. . hahaha. . once i was done w/ tha last chapter i went 'awwww. . . how cute!' ahahahahah. . . i tghink i juss might read it over again juss to say how cute it is again. lol. i'm so weird. well ne wayz. . . . keep up tha good workkk!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Trinity-Destler On: June 11, 2005 12:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was so brilliant and fun and well written. Then you had to do the 'pulling out to prevent pregnancy' schitick. It's ridiculous and very unnecessary considering the story didn't even go anywhere with it. It just bugged. Otherwise this was a great story, a really entertaining read and most importantly- everybody was in character for the most part.
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Title: MUST HAVE A SEQUEL
Reviewed By: freshice [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 20:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hilarious and wonderful. I demand a sequel. The characters actually resemble the ones in the anime ,unlike some other fics where the personalities are totally different. Great job ^^
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Reviewed By: honeybee On: April 27, 2005 01:26 EDT
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extremely funny and cute, you should write more stories i would really like to read more of your work, great job.
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Reviewed By: blackice3036 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 16:39 EDT
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Cool...please up date soon!!!!!!! THanks! Great story!!!!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Meepingcheese On: February 22, 2005 20:20 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG i compeatly loved that! words cannot describe my utter amazement... or some crap like that. ur a great writer but one thing u need to work on. im reading this in '05. u havent written anything since '03 *fumes* plzplzplzplzplz if u read this make a sequal or something plzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplz
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Reviewed By: ikjsvki d On: February 20, 2005 03:45 EST
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yey! really enjoyed it! that's it. i just know i hate it when people dont review...
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Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 20:00 EST
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This was a very cute and funny story. "Sit down, I'll brush your hair." He acquiesced, lowering himself to the ground by her feet. Am I wrong or should Inuyasha have fallen hard to the ground instead of lowering himself to her? Besides that and shippo's potty mouth, I thought this was a really good story! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 19:10 EST
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So far I really like this story. But I have to say I find it hard to believe that shippo would call Inuyasha an "asshole". He's just a little kid. If he did say that I must say the others would have reacted to his foul mouth.
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Reviewed By: kasumi1205 (logged out) On: January 15, 2005 23:42 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a great story, short and sweet.. (^_~)
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 18:34 EST
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There were 3 things I noticed about this fic, that I really liked, aside from, of course, it being very amusing. You spelled WacDnlds without the extra "o" (Don't people pay attention?). Inuyasha was uncircumcised. Kagome guided Inuyasha in (After all, who has put in more tampons? Also, it made it more like Kagome was having sex not having sex done to her). Excellent story.
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Reviewed By: Apathy5 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 23:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really cute and very funny. I really like your story. It was so refreshing reading a story that has good grammar. Don't get me wrong. I couldn't write a story if my life depended on it, and I commend all of you authors for what you do. However, I do know grammar and spelling, and some people are really weak in those areas. Your story was written well and it made it alot easier to read and enjoy. Just wanted to pass that along to you. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 00:43 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so cute
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Title: latex blues
Reviewed By: xelinu...lyndi(real nn) On: November 08, 2004 22:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well ummm. i loved it.. tee hee. naughty me. anyways i liked it alot and loved the ending. yes i agree with inuyashalover27 i am sick minded also. and that is pretty bad for a girl but i cant help it. i dont really write stories with lemons but i am perty ahem dirty minded on my own out of my storis also. still i love it. i love when you can imagine the feel and all that. O_o sorry did not mean to scare you there. well freak nasty me is going to shut up now. ja ne! sequel!!!
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