| "Latex Blues" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Reviewed By: traceyg On: November 14, 2003 02:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cont damit!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kokuryuha On: November 10, 2003 20:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, please continue!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Eni_2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 21:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. Write soon please!
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Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon On: October 30, 2003 22:05 EST
Comment/Review:
I just finished reading this story last night after planning to read it for quite a while, lol...and I was so glad that I did! This has to be one of the best stories I have had the pleasure of reading for a long time. You did such a good job! It was easy to read with very few mistakes, and (this is what impressed me by far the most) the characters reactions to everything that happened were very dead on! I don't think I have ever read another story with a lemon scene that has played out so realistically before. Inuyasha acting the way he did and his reasons behind it were so much like him, lol...and them being so awkward! That is personally how I believe they would act in that kind of embarassing situation. ^_^ Overall it was one of the funniest stories (and one of the most well written humor stories) I have ever read and I hope you write another sometime! *walks away still smiling*
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Reviewed By: AriChan90 On: October 30, 2003 15:58 EST
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lol! That was great! You should write more like this! But maybe with... Sango and Miroku! (the best couple)
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Title: You Beta Friend
Reviewed By: Merith On: October 16, 2003 00:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey girl! I read LB awhile ago - back in March or April I think. Anyway, my daughter loves IY fics (she's 17, and has reading difficulties so I read to her) ... we just finished chapter 6, and she about busted a gut with the last line! She loves it! -"They didn't fit me. They were too small." - She did ask, though, 'doesn't a man have to be erect to put one on?' What can I say, comes from public education! :) So, WHAT was Inuyasha doing to make it too small to fit? ;) Taking lessons from you-know-whose husband? *snort* Hugs and fishcakes lady!
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Title: Had to read it again!
Reviewed By: Manda, or Jaken Fan Girl #106 On: October 13, 2003 20:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, had to read it again but it isn't on your site! Where is it!? I mean, you had different endings to this didn't you?! I could have sworn you did... Well, just had to read it again. One question: After Inuyasha... came on her... You never mentioned it again, like she never wiped it off or anything. Just wondering if you just forgot about it. Well that's all I had to say, love the story still, bye! ~Manda
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Reviewed By: taijiya-sango [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 00:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was ver well writtened. It was fun, I do like description, but I would have enjoyed it better if they were broken into shorter paragraphs though. One big paragraph makes my eyes tired and I get lost too much. I did really enjoy this soon.Italics
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Reviewed By: chibifox On: September 26, 2003 21:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg that was soo cute and hilarious i absolutely lost it wen he sed they were too small...and also the people in my head liked it too
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Reviewed By: gabz On: September 14, 2003 15:18 EDT
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great story! please continue! i wanna know what happens!!! |
Reviewed By: HentaiGoddess On: September 12, 2003 17:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was absolutly taken by this, Please continue!! |
Reviewed By: Inu-samasSlave30 On: September 08, 2003 03:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was well written. The story flowed so well. Not a dull moment..KEEP IT UP!!! |
Reviewed By: J3$$ On: September 05, 2003 10:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It will be awesome if you continue writing it. hehe... Plz! |
Reviewed By: Admiral Biatch On:
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally got to this. Seemed to always not let me through. Must have been some server trouble. Anyway, I enjoyed that. |
Reviewed By: Descent_Into_Insanity [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 02:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, I have to admit, I hardly review on stories whatsoever, but I simply had to compliment you on your style of writing and the entire 'comedy' bit of it all. This was a great fanfic, and I think it can end and be considered completed at chapter 10. ^__^ Great job!
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