| "Joey's Big Brother" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Title: Screw history
Reviewed By: Zani never feels like signing in On: September 28, 2003 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Here is a little motivation to get that next chapter rolling because you are killing me with those last two cliffhangers. Please update soon. I know how it can be hard getting motivated to write a history paper but you have to do what you have to do. So Here is a little motivation for your report. Get it done or else I won't write any more reviews ~_~
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Reviewed By: redconvoy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 22:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this story. I cannot wait to read the next part.
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 21:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ack!! Another cliffhanger! Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: ChibiRyou On: September 27, 2003 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a cool thing Kaiba did for Joey, please finish it soon I really want to read the rest of this e-mail me at-Naraku1668@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Naru-chan On: September 27, 2003 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THat was so kind of Kaiba being so nice to Joey,*sniffs* it's so sweet I just want to cry.
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Reviewed By: THE RED WITCH On: September 25, 2003 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KEEP WRITTING! KEEP WRITTING! DON'T LEAVE US HANGIN'
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2003 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story! What a cliffhanger. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Kannie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2003 14:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice.....
not much of a cliffhanger though....
...i still like it and everything....but it just still seems to be seriously drifing off topic.... |
Title: It took me three whole minutes to fine the review button!
Reviewed By: Kannie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2003 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeeeevvvilll!!!!!!!
nnnnnnnnnnnnnnoooooooooo!!!
how could u!!!
i've waited for so long and now ur giving me a cliffhanger!?!?!?
it's just not very satisfying*hmph!*
o wellz.....
i still really like ur story! plz update soon> |
Reviewed By: Malik's Girl's Yami On: August 23, 2003 15:54 CDT
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So you know your history. I'm pleased. My you're smarter than I thought. Yes, my Hikari is right. Ra is my father and the others are my brothers and sisters. She is a baka. Don't you agree? Now I know where she is AND that she sent the virius to my laptop. Well now I MUST Torture her. Maybe I'll take her to Bakura. He could cause her severe pain. More severe than I probably could. Malik or Marik could do worse, but he's on his way to the Battle City Finals. He Will win and rule the world! I will rule at his side! I have stoped hunting you-for now. My new target is my Hikari. You are safe at the moment. |
Reviewed By: Malik's Girl On: August 23, 2003 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I haven't been reveiwing. too Busy running from my Yami. By the way, my Yami said that Ra and Anubis were both her brothers to make you look stupid. I think that from what she told me her Father is Ra and her brother is Anubis and all the other gods. I could be wrong. My Yami still has the laptop, but I sent her a virius. That should keep her off. Oh Ra! my Yami's outside of the building that I'm writing this in! I've got to go! |
Reviewed By: Dragon Of Eternal [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 14:12 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Need more of fanfic... *gasp* need mooore.... *faints*
Well, It looks like Liz just fainted from fanfic withdrawl so I the true D.O.E. Shall take over! *Maniacal cackling* *thump* She's nuts, right more 'cuz these two are gonna go nuts soon!
Hi no Kohie (fire of justice, for the jap impared) |
Reviewed By: PepperFang [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 10:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hilarious! I guessing that Seto is going to work at the game shop, right? |
Reviewed By: PepperFang [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! I loved it! |
Reviewed By: Kannie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2003 15:53 CDT
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no offence or anything....but...
isn't the plot now kinda drifting away from what was originally there? |
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