| "Joey's Big Brother" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: waterrain [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was good. Keep updating. This is really good. |
Reviewed By: Malik's Girl On: July 29, 2003 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Working on Adrenaline huh? Or just burnig Tea with my flames? That's always a fun thing to do! So be grateful.
~Malik's Girl~ |
Reviewed By: Malik's Girl On: July 29, 2003 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh a full weekend together?!?!?! This should get interesting. I being a Kaiba lover myself see where the story is going, so hate you teensey weensey bit because I don't hold Kaiba in high regards like Marik or Malik. I can deal with this story. So be grateful.
~Malik's Girl~ |
Reviewed By: Malik's Girl On: July 29, 2003 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Remember me? I'm sure you do. My Yami says hi too. Okay she didn't say hi exactly, she really said "I will find Shadowdragon and take revenge" but I have noting aginst you in this fic so I probably won't flame you. Be glad for that. Great story. Keep it up. Oh and by the way, please don't hold anything aginst me for I hold nothing aginst you. Just aginst your story Adrenaline. My Yami probably won't be reveiwing. I banned her from the computer with a password. She is still hunting Shadowdragon, so stay inside or else you might die. And I like this story so I don't want you dead quite yet. I'm reading all of your fanfics so be grateful
~Malik's Girl~ |
Reviewed By: Sakabatou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 08:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the story up to chapter 7, hope it doesn't turn up as a hentai, you seem to know what you're trying to write, but you're making your stories way too short. And too much talking before and after. |
Reviewed By: The Red Witch On: July 24, 2003 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS GREAT KEEP ON WRITTING. |
Reviewed By: Mary Ann On: July 24, 2003 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was really good keep up the work and update soon. |
Reviewed By: Mary Ann On: July 21, 2003 17:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow thank you and you rule as well lusciousdragon. May be some one could kidnap Mokuba and then they find 10 good things about each other but its onely an idea. Keep updating this is good. |
Reviewed By: Saphirerose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really getting interesting and I got a feeling I know who his partner will be. Anyway please upate soon. |
Reviewed By: Sakura tenshii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 15:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sakura:I have the feeling he's gonna get Seto as the big brother isn't he. I just have dat feeling ya
Crystal: Don't listen to my Hikari she's got problems
Sakura: Phsyic Problems like i had a dream and then it happened the next day ^_^ strange
Crystal: *sigh*
Sakura: KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! |
Reviewed By: Sakura tenshii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 15:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Italics *snicker* I loved this UPDATE YAY! i was first! Thanks for reviewing! |
Reviewed By: Fire Love Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really want to see what happens to Joey. |
Reviewed By: Mary Ann On: July 20, 2003 18:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ohhh what shall happen next i think i know who big bro gonna be but it could be someone else as well |
Reviewed By: Yoshimi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue! I really want more! |
Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotten Candy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2003 20:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
good fic luscious! keep up the good work^^ |
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