| "Joey's Big Brother" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kannie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2003 14:46 CDT
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nice.....
not much of a cliffhanger though....
...i still like it and everything....but it just still seems to be seriously drifing off topic.... |
Title: It took me three whole minutes to fine the review button!
Reviewed By: Kannie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2003 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeeeevvvilll!!!!!!!
nnnnnnnnnnnnnnoooooooooo!!!
how could u!!!
i've waited for so long and now ur giving me a cliffhanger!?!?!?
it's just not very satisfying*hmph!*
o wellz.....
i still really like ur story! plz update soon> |
Reviewed By: Malik's Girl's Yami On: August 23, 2003 15:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
So you know your history. I'm pleased. My you're smarter than I thought. Yes, my Hikari is right. Ra is my father and the others are my brothers and sisters. She is a baka. Don't you agree? Now I know where she is AND that she sent the virius to my laptop. Well now I MUST Torture her. Maybe I'll take her to Bakura. He could cause her severe pain. More severe than I probably could. Malik or Marik could do worse, but he's on his way to the Battle City Finals. He Will win and rule the world! I will rule at his side! I have stoped hunting you-for now. My new target is my Hikari. You are safe at the moment. |
Reviewed By: Malik's Girl On: August 23, 2003 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I haven't been reveiwing. too Busy running from my Yami. By the way, my Yami said that Ra and Anubis were both her brothers to make you look stupid. I think that from what she told me her Father is Ra and her brother is Anubis and all the other gods. I could be wrong. My Yami still has the laptop, but I sent her a virius. That should keep her off. Oh Ra! my Yami's outside of the building that I'm writing this in! I've got to go! |
Reviewed By: Dragon Of Eternal [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 14:12 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Need more of fanfic... *gasp* need mooore.... *faints*
Well, It looks like Liz just fainted from fanfic withdrawl so I the true D.O.E. Shall take over! *Maniacal cackling* *thump* She's nuts, right more 'cuz these two are gonna go nuts soon!
Hi no Kohie (fire of justice, for the jap impared) |
Reviewed By: PepperFang [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 10:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hilarious! I guessing that Seto is going to work at the game shop, right? |
Reviewed By: PepperFang [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! I loved it! |
Reviewed By: Kannie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2003 15:53 CDT
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no offence or anything....but...
isn't the plot now kinda drifting away from what was originally there? |
Reviewed By: HB On: August 17, 2003 01:17 CDT
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That's weird. Jounouchi is older than Kaiba if you check their birthday. |
Reviewed By: bakura_tomb_robber [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2003 20:09 CDT
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i think the shop is the game shop u no the one yugi and his grampa work in! |
Reviewed By: bakura_tomb_robber [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2003 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is SO hilarious! if i could add it to my fave fanfics like: fanfiction.net i would! lol |
Reviewed By: Malik's Girl's Yami On: August 02, 2003 12:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hello mortal fools. Yes Shadowdragon that means you. I see my Hikari told you that I got a laptop. Don't worry, she will be severely punished for that. Shadowdragon I'm giving you a chance to give yourself up too me,and make your death quick and painless even though I'd really like to torture you. I'll leave your Hikari alone as well. You really should give yourself up. My brothers Ra and Anubis are getting very angry. They want you for a sacrifice. Please the gods and hand yourself over to me. |
Reviewed By: Malik's Girl On: August 02, 2003 12:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you didn't delete my death threats from Adrenaline. It's a piece of history! Lokk at everyone who HATED me! And besides, DEATH THREATS RULE!!!!!!!!!!! So be grateful.
~Malik's Girl~
P.S. My Yami got her hands on a laptop, so she may send a few death threats to both of you. I'd beleive them if I were you. |
Reviewed By: crazygirlfromla [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good!!! Please write more.... |
Reviewed By: Mary Ann [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 12:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a very good chapter. Keep it up and update soon please. |
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