| "Joey's Big Brother" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: HB On: August 17, 2003 01:17 CDT
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That's weird. Jounouchi is older than Kaiba if you check their birthday. |
Reviewed By: bakura_tomb_robber [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2003 20:09 CDT
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i think the shop is the game shop u no the one yugi and his grampa work in! |
Reviewed By: bakura_tomb_robber [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2003 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is SO hilarious! if i could add it to my fave fanfics like: fanfiction.net i would! lol |
Reviewed By: Malik's Girl's Yami On: August 02, 2003 12:57 CDT
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Hello mortal fools. Yes Shadowdragon that means you. I see my Hikari told you that I got a laptop. Don't worry, she will be severely punished for that. Shadowdragon I'm giving you a chance to give yourself up too me,and make your death quick and painless even though I'd really like to torture you. I'll leave your Hikari alone as well. You really should give yourself up. My brothers Ra and Anubis are getting very angry. They want you for a sacrifice. Please the gods and hand yourself over to me. |
Reviewed By: Malik's Girl On: August 02, 2003 12:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you didn't delete my death threats from Adrenaline. It's a piece of history! Lokk at everyone who HATED me! And besides, DEATH THREATS RULE!!!!!!!!!!! So be grateful.
~Malik's Girl~
P.S. My Yami got her hands on a laptop, so she may send a few death threats to both of you. I'd beleive them if I were you. |
Reviewed By: crazygirlfromla [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good!!! Please write more.... |
Reviewed By: Mary Ann [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 12:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a very good chapter. Keep it up and update soon please. |
Reviewed By: waterrain [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was good. Keep updating. This is really good. |
Reviewed By: Malik's Girl On: July 29, 2003 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Working on Adrenaline huh? Or just burnig Tea with my flames? That's always a fun thing to do! So be grateful.
~Malik's Girl~ |
Reviewed By: Malik's Girl On: July 29, 2003 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh a full weekend together?!?!?! This should get interesting. I being a Kaiba lover myself see where the story is going, so hate you teensey weensey bit because I don't hold Kaiba in high regards like Marik or Malik. I can deal with this story. So be grateful.
~Malik's Girl~ |
Reviewed By: Malik's Girl On: July 29, 2003 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Remember me? I'm sure you do. My Yami says hi too. Okay she didn't say hi exactly, she really said "I will find Shadowdragon and take revenge" but I have noting aginst you in this fic so I probably won't flame you. Be glad for that. Great story. Keep it up. Oh and by the way, please don't hold anything aginst me for I hold nothing aginst you. Just aginst your story Adrenaline. My Yami probably won't be reveiwing. I banned her from the computer with a password. She is still hunting Shadowdragon, so stay inside or else you might die. And I like this story so I don't want you dead quite yet. I'm reading all of your fanfics so be grateful
~Malik's Girl~ |
Reviewed By: Sakabatou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 08:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the story up to chapter 7, hope it doesn't turn up as a hentai, you seem to know what you're trying to write, but you're making your stories way too short. And too much talking before and after. |
Reviewed By: The Red Witch On: July 24, 2003 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS GREAT KEEP ON WRITTING. |
Reviewed By: Mary Ann On: July 24, 2003 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was really good keep up the work and update soon. |
Reviewed By: Mary Ann On: July 21, 2003 17:52 CDT
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Wow thank you and you rule as well lusciousdragon. May be some one could kidnap Mokuba and then they find 10 good things about each other but its onely an idea. Keep updating this is good. |
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