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Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 01:47 CST
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Oi, I forgot to say, I'm up for fixing the chapters, spelling and grammar wise. I'm kind of taking a break from my artwork for a bit, and I would be honored to try and make your posted chapters better (if possible). :) mm@alesyira.com
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Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 01:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I *really* love this fic! I want to help correct grammar/spelling, but I'm one of those people that can't point out just *one* thing, I have to point out EVERYTHING... I tried typing out a corrected version, but pointing out the errors and suggested corrects got a little daunting.... and then I realized... this awesome story is so good - you can really fly through it so fast that you completely miss every error there might be to come across! So why bother fixing anything? :) Doing very well with this. when I was younger, I loved reading my mom's old pirate/romance novels, and this is just like bringing back *smirk* good memories... I love seeing the characters in these roles. I really am annoyed that you left it at a cliffhanger... So I guess the only thing I can do is wait every so patiently for your next update. And I'll close with my favorite thing to close with - You can't rush great writing. Good luck!
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Title: akaneko
Reviewed By: Akaneko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY STORYYYYYYYY UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Avid Reader On: November 24, 2003 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A cliffie An evil evil cliffie post more before I jump off the evil evil cliffie >=_
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Reviewed By: Katina108 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 15:11 CST
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really good chapt! I can't wait for the next one.. has Fluffy known the whole time she was a girl?!? OI!!
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Reviewed By: The Angel of Night On: November 24, 2003 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ack..a cliffy! Anyway, great chapter! I love this fic it's one of my favs. So, you gotta update really really soon! Come on, ya can't leave me hanging for too long.
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Reviewed By: gothic vampire On: November 23, 2003 22:06 CST
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very good story hope you update soon and by the way chapters ten and eleven are the same
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Reviewed By: friendly reviewer On: November 19, 2003 14:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story so far hope you update it soon i can't wait when kagome's secret is revield wel gtg peace
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Title: Updates....Please....
Reviewed By: serenity_blue On: November 15, 2003 00:45 CST
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I think you've posted the wrong chapter. It's also chappy 10. Well I hope you'll update soon or I will lose my interest in checking everytime if you've already updated. I hate to say it but I think they will too if you don't update soon enough. ^_^ Peace... I'm just too eager to find out what happened that's all! Don't hate me... :)
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Reviewed By: inu'slover On: November 12, 2003 16:00 CST
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hello i do believe that this is chapter 10 AGAIN!!!!!!!! .... ok sorry about that it is just that i have been waiting a while for you to update and when it seems that you have.... IT IS CH 10 AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!! very very blah
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Reviewed By: Gothic Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 13:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story, please update soon, I can't wait to read more!!!
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Reviewed By: Avid Reader On: November 10, 2003 07:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Does any one else have problems witi certen(sp) faces? Is there a way that I can convince you to put up all the chapters? Short of killing my self ( because then I couldnt read your fanficts -_- ) is there any thing..... Ok more reviews..... or the threat of NO REWIEWS will either work? 'Cause I can do both. Any way if you skiped over my rantings please post a new chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: Avid Reader On: November 10, 2003 07:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is there a way that I can convince you to put up all the chapters? Short of killing my self( because then I couldnt read your fanficts >_
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Reviewed By: kitsune484 On: November 09, 2003 21:56 CST
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hi um, i dont know if its my computer being retarted or not but it looks like u posted the same chap. twic
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Reviewed By: powerpuffbarbie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You Mother Fucking BITCH! How dare you! You should have stoped earlier! I swear if you don't update soon, as in today soon, i swear to god you will be dead before sunset! I will find you and kill you with my bare hands! Ja Ne. Linze-_- ~~~~~~~~ Sorry about her. she's....emotional. i loved your story though. it was awsome. please update soon. Ja Ne! Lindsey^_^
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