| "On The Sea" Reviews/Comments [ 207 ] |
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Reviewed By: LiL Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 20:49 CST
Comment/Review:
omg! i love it! cant wait til u update! cant wait til maybe u get a lemon scene either :p LiL Elf
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Title: YOUR STORY!!!!!!
Reviewed By: grinnig idoit On: February 06, 2004 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha was kinda mean in this chappie...... make him nice next time... please? oh and.... THIS STORY KICKS ASSSSSSSSSSSS! :)
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Reviewed By: 12blue12(logged off) On: February 06, 2004 16:33 CST
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ok chappie kinda ok i guess ii thought thr would be more fire in yor writing cuz u took so klong i guess ill have to wit agin for the next chappie and i hope u can update soon! cya!
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Reviewed By: Spider Slayer On: February 06, 2004 14:40 CST
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hmm, yeah, veeeerrryyy dead ^^great chapter though, i love this story!! update soon, please!
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Reviewed By: s2pid On: January 31, 2004 17:58 CST
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plz rite mor it's a really really really good fanfic!
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Reviewed By: KuramasGirl (not logged in) On: January 31, 2004 16:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this fiction!! Great work! And I think you should put a lemon. Just don't make it a rape one... or someone other than Inuyasha and Kagome... If you do do someone other than them or him or her... Please say that! I don't want to read any other ones >
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Reviewed By: powerpuffbarbie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 00:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU NEED TO UPDATE FF AND MM AND THE SAME DAMN TIME! I'M GETTING CONFUSED CAUSE FF IS AHEAD AND I READ IT, THE I CHECK MM, IT SAYS YOU UPDATED. BUT I ALREADY READ IT ON FF! DAMN YOU! UPDATE! NOW!
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 04:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, that was a great story so far. i cannot wait till you update. it is really good. This is the first pirate story that i have read so far, and yeah just wow.. keep up the good work. Krystal.
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Title: The Rescue
Reviewed By: fluffysprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 02:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this chapter a lot! Other than those guys *grrr.....* trying to rape Kagome, and Inuyasha *cheer!* rescuing her - the action was great! And the main things that she was worried about was letting Inuyasha down and failing Koga! That sounds like something I would say! I know I've read another story by you under your other penname, I just can't remember what it is - though I saw it on AFF.net. So now Inuyasha knows Kagome has a softer side and voce versa! How is that going to play into future events, hmm? *curious* Yes, you are evil! :P Sara-sama
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Reviewed By: Relix On: January 28, 2004 02:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And this is the review: I love it.
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Title: To the author
Reviewed By: Relix On: January 28, 2004 02:00 CST
Comment/Review:
This is not a review but a helpful tip: I too had trouble reading reviews, so wrote one myself and POP! they were readable again.
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Reviewed By: dragonrose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 19:01 CST
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wonderful fic... well thought out and character development is nice lemons are also really nice... they are generally helpful to plot as it is a natural part of life
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Reviewed By: 12blue12 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 18:18 CST
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loved the latest updae kinda scary on kages part g2 say love your story love love it your a great writer im gettin kinda sick of how some ppl write cuz it monst of the time doesnt make sence so glad to found a person wit a 10 on writin style and one wit great ideas well hopin for more updates soon hope u feel beta soon cya
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Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 16:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Good chap! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: AnimeHimeko On: January 25, 2004 21:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! This fanfic is going really well. And for the record, I think a lemon would fit in perfectly. You could easily just take it out for the FF.Net version. But do what you want. Keep up the good work!
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