| "Remembering You" Reviews/Comments [ 100 ] |
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Reviewed By: Aditu On: October 10, 2003 08:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent chapter...how I love it when that happens, really makes my mornings,lol. I can understand why you couldn't wait another 5 chapters to have Kagome remember, and grateful for that too ;) and you did a great job with weaving it into the story. It makes sense that she would be a little fuzzy remembering everything in all consideration, I imagine it would be like sensory overload to recall all that clearly all of a sudden. Oh and to comment on your comment to my last review (that sounds silly for some reason, lol) about the gruesome Hojo death scene; yes, it is a good thing that you did a good job describing it so...gruesomely. It shows that not only can you write nice fluffy, sad, or happy stuff, but that you are also versatile with being able to write those kind of scenes as well, some authors tend to shy away from being too descriptive in those cases. That you can be descriptive on all different types of scenarios is a good thing, that was what I intended to mean when I commented on it before, lol. So...anyway, thanks for the update, thoroughly enjoyed it and looking forward to the next when you have time to write and post. I like guessing what's going to happen next and then see if I'm right or not, lol. Best Wishes :)
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Reviewed By: Hell's lil Bitch On: September 21, 2003 06:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur to EEeeevilll!! I Hate cliffys..I mean litterally H-A-T-E them. be nice update. onegai 'cause if u dont ill be sure to "JUMP UR 'OH' SOO EVIL ASS AN KILL IT SO DEAD IT CANT BE REINCARNATED!!! N E ways great story."> |
Reviewed By: oracle44 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god that was great. such an emotional rollercoaster. I was so not expecting what happened to Hojo. can't wait to sea what happens |
Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 16:31 CDT
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good way of getting rid of hojo, excellent story so far, and an awesome idea to have inuyasha learn all of those martial art styles, i am curioius to see how you bring those out. and just for personal reference, do you know any styles? just curious, good luck with the rest! |
Reviewed By: Aditu On: September 19, 2003 07:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for another excellent chapter! I had anticipated a really sad sob story from Kagome, and while it was sad it wasn't overly sappy and instead really made a great connection with what you have going. Did that make sense? (I need more coffee) Anyway what I really wanted to commend you on was the horror scene, well done on the gruesome carnage! Very descriptive and I easily pictured it in my mind. I love how your story is going and I can't wait to read more when you have time away from homework to write ;) That semi cliffy you left at the end there made me want to scream, lol, at least I didn't have the urge to shake Kagome again, yay. Will check in for the next chapter with eagerness! Thanks again and best wishes |
Reviewed By: ady anhee 999 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 03:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading your story and I hope you continue it. I like the twist and the whole 'Will & Grace' thing was a riot! I can not wait for the next chapter. :) |
Reviewed By: LeonRinko On: September 18, 2003 23:23 CDT
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Okay, understand that Kagome doesn't remember InuYasha because her memories of the time she spent in the past were erased when she returned to the future for the final time. But WHY did she COMPLETELY forget about her 'Touken-Oniiisan'?! She practically grew up with him in her life until InuYasha 'left' when she was 14, so she should at least remember who 'Touken-kun' is even though she can't remember who InuYasha was to her. |
Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 On: September 18, 2003 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The rating system only goes up to ten? Oh well... This has to be the absolute GREATEST fanfic I've ever read... I can't wait for it to be updated again! |
Reviewed By: Maribel On: September 18, 2003 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep on going don't stop!! make sure kagome remembers inuyasha!!! |
Reviewed By: Naishin no Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2003 12:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, now I am hungry for ramen. Mmm, pork ramen. Ano...gomen ne. I am pregnant, and these cravings come so quickly! ^^;
A sweet chapter! Ha! Houjou is gay? Now that is amusing! I was in tears at the ending. Poor Inuyasha-sama. His spirit must be strong, indeed, because I know that if I were in the same situation--waiting 500 years to see my love and then to hide those feelings inside once again--I would die from the suffering.
Again, a sweet chapter! I understand your school situation, so I will wait patiently for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Aditu On: September 09, 2003 08:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I really didn't think that there would be an update already, not that I'm complaining, quite the opposite! Loved it of course, though I feel so sorry for InuYasha, poor guy, wanting Kagome to remember him so badly and all. Makes me want to reach in the monitor and shake her "IT'S HIM!", lol. Can't wait to read what you have in store for what has happened to her over the past few years and such, even if it is sad. Anyway thank you for the new chapter and will check on my usual daily basis for the next one. Really enjoyed it. Best wishes! |
Reviewed By: katie9821 On: September 09, 2003 02:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading your story. I think it's classic bringing in the whole Inuyasha gang into Kagome's time. I hope Kagome will begin to remember her time in Sengoku Jidai. |
Reviewed By: Ta-ti On: September 08, 2003 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*LOVE* your fic and u BETTER finish it......or else....^_^ sike nah but i really would like to see this thru.... ~adios~ |
Reviewed By: Aditu On: September 08, 2003 08:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so happy to see you updated! Thank you, I was starting to get worried, :). Hope that we won't have to wait too long for the next chapter *sigh* I will still be checking every day though, lol.
You did a wonderful job of evolving the characters personalities over the 500 years,how they integrated into society and...well this whole story is excellent. You make it so easy to picture things as they happen and that's what I look for the most. I got a kick out of the 'conversation' with Kikyou ;).I guess what I want to say is that I really enjoy reading this fic. Thank you for sharing it! On a side note,I don't envy you having to come up with last names, that must have been tough as you stated in your note at the end. But you did a good job. Keep up the good work and best wishes! |
Title: Naishin no Miko
Reviewed By: Naishin no Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 23:32 CDT
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Amazing! I am impressed to actually read an ending to the Inuyasha series that makes perfect sense to me! I have to finish the third chapter because my husband is kicking me from the computer, but this is definitely a fun story to read. I am also pleased to see Midoriko remembered because almost no one remembers her involvement in this story, and you included Shinto legend! Arigatou gozaimasu! I know it's asking too much, but I'd love to see Aizen-Myoo make an appearance in the story. However, I will be happy if you just continue this story! |
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