| "The Reincarnation of Ephemeral Existence." Reviews/Comments [ 74 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shadow-Specter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 13:49 CDT
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MALIk is the one who killed Yugi's parents...Marik looked like him so he screamed ^_^ there is what I really meant |
Reviewed By: Shadow-Specter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 13:48 CDT
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^^; well I was expecting a lemon or something by the way this chappie was heading but oh well. I think I know why Yugi is screaming...is Marik the one who killed Yugi's parents and tortured him?! I think he is...why else would he scream? Unless it is a new plot twist you're adding. Oh well. Looking forward to the next chappie! This fic rocks! ^_^ [gives a vampire Yami plushie to Sweetdeily] to motivate you to update ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 09:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey--
excellent work. i loved the way you expressed yugi's thoughts of how the world changes, leaving loved ones and things behind, and so on and so forth. very expressive.
nice job describing yugi's conflicting emotions for yami. i laughed when i read the part about yugi explaining the voice in his head. teehee.
oh, i get it.....yugi must think that marik is malik----ya know...since they look alike and malik is the one that did all that bad stuff to the little guy. awwww....poor yugi.
*huge grin* a lemon? oh....i can't wait for it!
keep up the great work and please update soon!
(do my comments seem varied and random? probably......)
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^ |
Reviewed By: E On: July 31, 2003 05:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. Yugi is the greatist. I love how he is a strong sarcastic ego tripping upbeat guy. It seems most peaple are guesing that Yami is the guy w/ the white bike. I don't blame them because they belong together but I'm hoping for Yami to get competition temporarily. After all if somebody from a race one hated for most of one's life,1) mislead them into believing them to be something they werent.2) Didn't respect ones decision and back off trying to force them into a relationship they werent ready for,{after all he could of tried to court him and change his mind, instead of confirming that all vamps are basterds}. 3) put him to sleep, never to see his family and friends again. Well I think a person would be pist and need alot of incentive to forgive. Besides its not offent Yugi gets to give Yami hell. Having him chase after Yugi w/ a few failed attemps would be funny.
Anyway I think I'll stop my mild ranting and just beg you to please continue to update as soon as possible. |
Reviewed By: Cherreh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 04:33 CDT
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Lemon? *smile*
Yami: Lemon? *grin*
Some lemony good ness. ^_^ Me like. :P
Update soon!
~~~Cherry~~~ |
Reviewed By: Mortalgirl On: July 31, 2003 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LoL me again.. actually I reread the first paragraph of chapter nine... I didn't read the story wrong I read your author notes wrong
You can think of my constant ranting as umm a type of worship? *shrug* lol well good job!! I think you'd get more reviews on ff.net.. maybe a couple hundred more? but there really picky on there ratings ne? oh wellz.. take comfort in the fact that I worship your writing.. if it's any comfort at all ^^ |
Reviewed By: Mortalgirl On: July 31, 2003 02:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did you know I read both your stories.. this whole time I forgot to review.. and I've been checking for it nearly every day.. actually when I have time I check it many times a day :D
and when you update you don't just put up one chapter.. you put up many!! ^^
LoL your one of the fantastic writers who don't need to be constantly bombarded :D
any ways just saying great work and thanks
hehe.. Yugi should listen to the voice more often... but tell me..
how is there going to be a lemon if Yugi's screaming at Malik.. didn't he kill him when he was nine?? Or did I just not read the story properly.. I think i'll go back and do just that ^^ |
Reviewed By: E On: July 30, 2003 02:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic and I love Yugi more. A ego tripping Yugi is the best. I have a few guesses as to who might be the rider to the bike but I'm not betting on it. Hope you update soon. I have been checking out for this update everyday and Im wondering how I missed it the first place. I wish more writers acknowledge Yugi's strength more. |
Reviewed By: Silver Lily aka Blood Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*voice in head sreams* yeah!!! LEMONS!!! WOHOO!!!!*
You see that little vice in Yuugi's head and the little voice in my head think along pretty much the same lines, and right now I'm inclined to agree with it. Continue!!!! |
Reviewed By: Lauren Filiatreault On: July 28, 2003 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeeeeeeekkkkkkkkk!!!!! i must see more!! and sex scenes too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think the bike rider is Yami! |
Reviewed By: Shadow-Specter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 14:50 CDT
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Hey! Great chappie ^_^ I'm guessing the rider on the white bike is Yami...if it isn't Yami then I'm guessing it's Seto. One or the other ^_^ Please put some yami/yugi ness up soon!!! |
Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 14:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is really, wonderfully, excellently perfect! And Yugi with guns and weapons and on an ego trip is one of the sexiest things I can imagine! Thank you for giving us this delicious glimpse of Yugi! I kind of wish Ryou and Bakura didn't have to die, but... Keep up the excellent wonderful perfect work! |
Reviewed By: RyuArashi On: July 28, 2003 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of course...the rider of the white bike is...Yami!
Lord...our Yugi sure is stubborn, isn't he? Even after all the phenomenal sex...wait, it's been 730 years...Man, he *needs* to get laid, and soon!
Seriously, I love both your stories...you've shown Yugi to be what I believe him to be-a strong, smart, cute, but sexy little guy...! I *really* want him and Yami to get together, though.*smirks* Yami is sooo sexy! I also love how you showed that he can be vulnerable with the person he loves....I know before Yugi finally admits he's deeply in love with Yami, there'll be many ups and downs....besides, who else can Yugi-chan love but the guy that can make him cum just by inserting his finger? *cackles* Great work, hon...I look forward to the next installment! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Moonlitspire On: July 28, 2003 13:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yes...so coincidental? I can always hope... ^__^ Hurry up and post! Too much suspense is bad for your health XD
I love this story to death! Byee! |
Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 13:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey---
excellent as usual....can't wait to see a lemon. i can smell the citrusy freshness of it now!
keep up the great work and please update soon!
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^ |
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